The Silent Tale

Description

During the Koryo Dynasty Chanyeol served as general to the soldiers of the kingdom, who fought against Mongol invaders from the north. Before the warring began, Chanyeol was a newly married groom enjoyably adapting to the start of life as a responsible husband. Little did he know that his wife, Namjoo, would become the victim of a manhunt issued by the queen's sister. Chanyeol returns home upon the news that Namjoo is missing, but when he reaches home he meets a bloody mess that may or may not be his wife. 

 

***Characters are mine, this is all from my imagination. I'm only borrowing images and names, no other intention.

Foreword

So if you haven't heard, I re-watched a movie called The Legend of the Evil Lake and it absolutely broke my heart (no literally - i mean it). So I haven't been able to get the movie out of my head, and to rid of it, I'm going to write a short story which will be around maybe 10-15 chapters (but of course I'm going to be taking my time since I want to write 3 Ways too). 

And plus, I another story for Chanyeol x Namjoo ^^

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juyo94
#1
Chapter 4: please tell me the parents is ChanJoo ! Lol xD this is daebak :)
Tinywings
#2
Chapter 4: And you did it again.

You always manage to tug at vulnerable heartstrings, causing the reader to feel sad because of what is to never happen. I think linking it back to the present has something endearing about it, something that makes the bitterness a little more sweet. It made you think that there is a next time, a continuation for something that seemingly ended, and that brought hope. Or else I would be sitting here crying over this sad piece of writing.

The last chapter was very well written. The flow was smooth and clear and I could follow it easily. I would say this is the best written chapter, closely followed by the others though. But I believe that in the last chapter you really tried to bring across the feelings and emotions the two of them were feeling, so yeah, this one is a beauty.

The whole fanfic itself was lovely to read. Of course, you told me about it already, but still it did not mean this would have less impact on me. It is a wonderful story, sad but still beautiful. Good job!!
Tinywings
#3
Chapter 3: Oh dear oh dear oh dear Chanyeol is going through hell because of this. Completely understandable because in front of him is both his wife as a coldless spirit that wants to kill, and he always seems to see glimpses of the Namjoo he adores. Also terribly sad for Namjoo when she realized what she was doing, and what is going on with her. One can only try to imagine how horrified she feels when she realized a spirit has possessed her and makes her do things she would never want to do. Sigh... Why is this so sad...? :'<
Tinywings
#4
Chapter 2: Oh gosh see me spamming~

Nooooooooooooooo Namjooooooooooooo! :'< This is the start of the end, or not, huhu? :'< Namjoo was such a lovely wife before this all, and now she has turned into someone that nobody can recognize anymore... I am forever jealous of your writing, sigh. Keke, I was thinking of Harry Potter when I was reading the scene with Namjoo and the river/lake, thinking of a dark lake in the deepest core of the forest, where evil lies. Or something like that. Maybe it has nothing to do with Harry Potter lol. BUt very well written! One little point: When Chanyeol heard about Namjoo and quickly made his way back home, it all went a little too fast for me. One moment he was at the palace, and two sentences later he was back home. I think you could have added a little something, just the time that passed not too weird. But again, that is just me, and it's only a small thing, but I was momenteraily surprised when I read the word 'grandma', thinking chanyeol was still busy getting on his horse.

Sigh... Can I continue reading this without the sadness eating me up?
Tinywings
#5
Chapter 1: At first I thought where this was going, then I realized it was someoje finding a book and then the 'real' started. Really creative to begin it like that!! I really liked it!! And my dear is Namjoo a shy lovely young woman in this story keke~ So innocent they are together, such a bliss~ And now the big terror and drama will surely await me haha. But a very good first chapter!! Easy to follow and smooth written!!
Tinywings
#6
WHUAHAHAHHAA FIRST SUBSCRIBER HEREEEEEEE! i didn't know you already posted it lol. faaaaaaail~ tell me the next time lol! well, i can't really speak nonsense of anything right now because this is only the description and foreword, but i'm terribly excited about this, and bring it up! crush my heart and make me cry! it's not luhan so it's okay, i can take this!

*silent goes get tissues already*