Sulli in Wonderland

Description

Sulli wandered off, the sound of her clacking heels following behind her. The clock was ticking, and it couldn't be stopped, no matter what. 

There was a golden string tied to the clock. It kept the clock dangling in mid-air, causing it to sway, just like how that golden circle in a grandfather's clock ticks.

That string was her life. If she doesn't fulfill her mission within the alloted time, that string would be cut off.

...And, Sulli's life would be over.


 

Will Sulli be able to make it before the clock strikes at 30? Can she focus on her mission without being consumed by a world full of enigma?

...Or, will she fall "dead"?

Foreword

Okay! So this is my challenge from http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/3660 ----> MusicChibi. I don't know how to put links here, so, I deeply apologize for that. It's my first time writing up a story which would be reviewed (though I've already taken up a challenge before in the Valentine's Day thing). I've been informed that I couldn't write informally here, so just imagine the right kind of expression I'm doing right now (since I'm a person with a big sense of expression).

It's actually my first time being reviewed because I've never been reviewed in my years of writing freely. I'm anxious as well as excited for the review. I want to improve the way I write, my choice of words, and my creativity. I trust MusicChibi, because I've read a lot of her reviews and she's a really good reviewer.

And, here's a quote to start everything grooving.

 

"The clock is ticking."

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jinlissul
#1
Chapter 1: oh wow. o u o
lostbluebunny
#2
DEABAK!!
i could read this over and over again!
HinataSnow #3
Okay.... The weirdest and funniest story i've read so far~!!! IU was a rabbit?!! Hahahax~!
-xMomo #4
Waaaaaa ! This story is soo good :)<br />
Do more ^^
TeaMinT
#5
waaaaaaaaaaaaa. I love u yeobo. You know that right? =)