The Truth Within

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At that moment, he felt his soul leave his body. He didn't know what to do. He hadn't even told him that he loved him.

Foreword

~The Truth Within~

The affairs of the heart are indeed strange and beyond human comprehension. When all logic says that something is just not right or something just shouldn't happen because it's impossible, the heart says otherwise.

 

 

 

 

 

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A/N: So this is yet another idea adopted from yet another ideas workshop. xD I really need these idea workshops in order to keep me inspired, I'm usually not a oneshot kind of person (I much prefer writing full-length fics) so I need a lot of idea and inspiration for them. This is adopted from Kay_Tea114's idea workshops called Fish Fingers & Custard.

EDIT: Since Kay_Tea114 has recently removed her workshop (and quit AFF), I will post her original prompt here: Two people who are afraid to confess their feelings eventually end up being in a life or death situation. Feelings emerge, a fight begins.

Author's Thoughts
gwendal738
I'm having a really hard time with this fic. ._. but a couple of lines left and I'm done.
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Gogiswag #1
Chapter 1: alright I'm sobbing like a girl who just got dumped by his fiancée without any explanation- ISTG AUTHOR-NIM YOU DID A REAAALLLLY GREAT JOB! this story is so well-written and so beautiful I can't control my tears oml ILYSMMMMM
charismaticfrog #2
this is truly amazing and i'm so glad i stumbled across it today. c:
really, one of my favorites. ♡
Jasonlee #3
Chapter 1: I love ur story !! Jindy ㅋㅋ
monicaandy #4
Thank you so much for this JinDy :) I really enjoy it but you felt me wanting more :S
Phoenix_Soar #5
Chapter 1: I'm so glad I got free time tonight to read this fic :D Is it just me, or are you getting better and better and better? XD Cos believe me, the writing is epic here <333

And I can't express just how much I love your descriptions of their feelings. /feels feels everywhere/ I could just FEEL that awkward tension between them, yanno XD

Everything was so well-written and I loved the hospital scenes too. And Junjin's sass XD "I just came back from the dead and not even a hug from you?" <-- LMAO XD

Perfect one-shot is perfect, hon! Loved it ♥
Tezukai #6
Chapter 1: Ok, this. I was sitting here thinking how lovely everything was, then the manager mentioned backflips and my mind went "oh, Jin got really hurt once because of that" then he practised, and he was hurt, and I was like "NOOOOO, AUTHORNIM, DON'T KILL HIM!!!" I thought, you're good at angst, you might make us think it'll be like the real thing, but then let him die at the end. So I was very nerveous, and cried, but then, he woke up :D YEEEE!!! This was so nice, your last two oneshot's have now been about real event's, well this one a little bit more fiction :P And I really loved how you changed POV so fluidly, it was really nice for the pace :D Now I have almost no Jindy to look forward to from you O.O
Tezukai #7
ahh, yeah, this couple, i love oneshots though, and yeah, YEAH!! i dunno what to say, hope you start writing this soon :D
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