white wings

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Love me tender

Love me true

Cry and break as you should do

Kill me softly

Kill me sweet

By the gates of Hell we'll meet

                                   - From, You

Foreword

Written for The Sky Is The Limit || Writing Contest (Round 3: March Madness) Subround 2

Prompt #29:

‘The more you love me, the more I ruin you. I will take my darkness and I will push it inside of you.’
- David Levithan

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sweet-and-cookies
#1
Chapter 1: Wow, I noticed that you're metaphors are really just.... WOAH O____O
I love writings like yours<3
B_ann1
#2
Chapter 1: This is simply amazing! I read it twice in a row and only on the second read it actually opened to me. I think you used the prompt really well and you write beautifully.
Good luck for the contest and thank you for this :)
wuffles #3
Chapter 1: Omg brain overload. The language is so beautiful and I love the way you spun this story. Yet again I dont really understand some parts. but that's the beauty of it right :)