On The Horizon

Description

I’ve always been there when you needed me, always one step behind you;

You may be someone else’s precious crystal now, but you’ve always been the Sun for me.

Now you have someone else to think about at night, but I spend the nights sleepless for you;

You may have a lot on your mind now, but you’ll always mean the world to me.

 

- It happens so often nowadays that I don’t even wince when it starts.

Foreword

This is my first attempt at stepping out of my comfort zone and dealing with the dilemma. I was and still am conflicted about writing this since this is very different from what I usually write but the idea came to me quite suddenly and forcefully, in the form of this gif.

 

 

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lsgrlr
#1
Chapter 9: Noooooo!!!! I wanted a confession. But I like the open ended ending, it means that although you stopped writing the story still goes on.
starlight_elk
#2
Chapter 9: Ok so that was an extreme twist kkk I am sleep deprived so I end up like a log in my bed this afternoon... actually I drean about this story, I guess I wanted it to last longer or have a sweet ending lol. Turn up I can't remember the dream but I felt really happy about it so I guess they found a way to be together.
Again thanks for another wonderful story ^^
itsaihara
#3
Chapter 9: There you have it, now I got what you meant when you commented on my comment. Well, what could say? This is life we're talking about. Afterall, I'm truly sorry for Krystal. She's just too blind to notice it all. Unintentionally being the third wheel or urm, I can't find the right word. Nevertheless, you did a great job, authornim! I never saw this coming, really :)
CroixJean
#4
Chapter 8: I wanted this to be a longer story ;_;. But, I'm not sure it needs a disturbing plot twist. I mean, if it's that bad as you make it sound, why make it? o.o It's tragic enough that Myung started at the short end of the stick and ended being at the short end of the stick, therefore realistically not getting a happy ending. Though the last bit sort of threw me off cause I got nothing from Sungjong that he's in any way in love with Krystal and that's why he kept saying weird things. So the whole "loving moments" schtick is VERY weird and random.
itsaihara
#5
Chapter 8: It ends already? Like seriously, auhor-nim? Nah, I'll be waiting for the next chapter. It must be really hard for Myungsoo but he's such a dear friend with noble heart. God bless you always, Myungsoo!
itsaihara
#6
Chapter 7: Poor Myungsoo. Hey, I believe your waiting will be paid off soon. Stay strong, Myungie!
itsaihara
#7
Chapter 6: Myungsoo is such a good friend. He's perfect but he is too noble, why can't you see him, Krystal? Ugh. It must be really hard for him to be there with Krystal when she was broken-hearted yet he, himself likes or even loves her. I'll totally fail. Sungjong really loves Luna, can it be more complicated than it already has? Authornim, let Myungsoo be happy. Aigoo~ :D
sincerelychristine #8
Chapter 6: Yayy update! Man I wish Krystal wasn't so blind.. >>
itsaihara
#9
Chapter 5: Sungjongie~ aigoo too naive! Krystal-ah, open your eyes widely. Can't you see.Myungsoo? xD
sincerelychristine #10
Chapter 5: Wow this is really good but I hope she ends up with Myungsoo!!