Junghwan thinks that controlling what he eats and making failed attempts at working out isn't enough. He needs a new diet plan. One that will help him lose weight and be just as fit as the other members.
Chapter 15: I keep coming back to reread this because it's just sooo good. Of course there's flaws especially with the transitioning of scenes etc but who really cares when your characters have such strong voices and your writing is good, you just lack a bit ot technique. Tip: no need to explain in such details about their daily schedule, we don't have to know unless it's relevant. Since it's been years already I guess maybe you have learned it by now but I wanted to point it out anyway. GOOD LORD I LOVE THIS FIC. It's just somehow soooo cute and sweet and exciting and I'm really curious to what happens in the other half of this chapter that you never released?? I know maybe you don't WANT TO update this fic anymore but just in case that you DO then please do so, no one cares that it's been ages or that your style has changed. We just enjoy reading it^^ good night!
Chapter 15: oh yay!!! youre back and im loving this new update!!!
Hopefully the next update would come really soon because dang, this fic is really one of my favourite and i hate leaving it to my own imagination XD
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