The Quest [INDEFINITE HIATUS]

Description

It wasn't his choice to join in the quest, but it was inevitable. He had to find the seven remaining gems to complete the quest and be free. Never did he thought he'd do it.

Foreword

Lee Sungjong was at a very young age when both his parents died. He witnessed them being murdered by hunters. His father gave him a box and a necklace and told him to run away quickly before the hunter murdered him. Sungjong ran away as quickly as he could as he could and luckily, he escaped from the hunters' clutches.

12 years later found him as a grown up teenage boy. He was no ordinary teenage boy that you see everywhere. He was special. He had mind reading powers. The box, which had four mirrors and eight holes in it, that he received from his late-father contained a note inside it. The note had said something about a quest and eight gems. It also mentioned about an enchanted mirror which was supposed to be the main goal of the quest.

What will Sungjong do? Will he fulfill his father's wishes and fight with his life to get the enchanted mirror? 

 


This is an entry for Erischaotica's 1/3 Enchanted Writing Contest. Wish me luck!

Reviewed by Sakura Review Shop (87%), Mental Breakdown (90.5%), Spellbound (85%), INFINITIZED (88%)

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Current word count: 8,280 words

Comments

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AhSongyi #1
Chapter 7: Really?pity you..
Just relax your mind first.take some fresh air.refresh your mind.
Roochi
#2
Chapter 2: I like this chapter a lot! :)

Myungsoo is so adorable here and he seems like the laid back type.
Sungjong<3 is lucky to have met him and to get his second gem this easily.
But it feels Rushed. Kind of unrealistic, because you don't just trust strangers that are supposed to be your 'enemies' and they give you thier gems(if they happened to have one) because they're the lazy, laid back type. I find it hard to relate.
I think it would be alot better if you said that after a couple of weeks the two got to know each other and their friendship blossomed enough for Sungjong to feel comfortable and safe around Myungsoo. And for Myungsoo to ‏trust Sungjong and give him his Sapphire. It would be more realistic like that.

But that's just my opinion and it's your story and you're free to do whatever to do with it. :)‎

Anyway good luck with the contest and i hope you win ^__^
Roochi
#3
There are barely any good Sungjong story around and this one sounds interesting :)
i like it already~~