Baby, Don't Cry Tonight

Description

When the countdown is starts, one person will sit back and watch in delight, while the other two prepare to race time to reach what their hearts desire deep within.

Foreword

Inspired by EXO's Baby Don't Cry and Hans Christian Andersen's The Little Mermaid.

 

*oh and yes, the story originally had a made up girl named Kayla, but i decided to change to Lay (y) i wanted to put in Chanyeol, but dancing .. idk ok Lay :D and yeah ok i wanted to keep him as a guy but i thought it'd be weird if the arranged marriage was with a guy ?? idk like higher up people iDK SORRY PLEASE DON'T BE OFFENDED ok thanks for understanding ;;

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miiwaah #1
Chapter 9: I love this. It has the little mermaid feels to it. My poor Tao. I want to cry for him. :'(
desolatum #2
Chapter 5: -eagerly anticipating for the moment when kris just _____s tao- JK!!! but keep writing! I am enchanted and magically captivated by your wonderful tale @_@
desolatum #3
HI LISSA ok anyway ill find the time to read this later maybe anyway #yolo #peace
emo_bear #4
Chapter 3: i kinda like how their relationship is,right now.it's sweet and deep.ahhh i really like this <333
MoiNyaa #5
Chapter 3: Lololol They are so awkward "See you again friend" oh god that's the most awkward sentence ever xD
westkitsune #6
Chapter 3: That was adorable~ I love how Kris just takes Tao to his tent. And lol gummy smile and panda-eyes, two cute individuals. I'm in love with Kris' personality here, he's actually how I imagine him to be in my head.. not the bi.tch-faced bastard in some fics haha! Hope they get to meet again soon~~
Adsrith #7
Chapter 2: IM SO EXCITED
PLEASE KEEP WRITING AND DONT GIVE UP
IT SADDENS MY FANGIRL HEART SO MUCH WHEN I READ SOMETHING SO GOOD AND THEN THE AUTHOR JUST DECIDES TO QUIT
PLEASE KEEP WRITING! I LOVED IT.
westkitsune #8
Chapter 1: I love the concept of how you came up with the plot!~ And even more that it isn't just a rip-off of the fairytale story. I've actually decided to listen to the audio of Baby Don't Cry while reading your updates to set the feels ^o^
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