Two Evil Geniuses

Description

Cho Kyuhyun, the so-called King of Sharp Tongue, is enough to flip tables at the SuJu dorm and three fangirls are already too much (although they are a great help, too). But what happens when Kyuhyun's little sister, the Great Cho Gyuri, decided to go back to Korea and live with her brother and the rest of Super Junior (plus those three fangirls)? Mayhem, havoc in the SuJu dorms, some fluffiness and a whole lot of mind blowing craziness. To simply put it, there will be no ordinary day in the SuJu dorms anymore because:

2EVILNESS + UNENDING AWESOMENESS + WITTINESS + A LITTLE BIT OF WEIRDNESS = TWO EVIL GENIUSES NAMELY CHO KYUHYUN AND CHO GYURI.

Foreword

I just have to write this before I turn my other stories (which is supposed to be melodrama-ish) into some fluffy romcom. XD

I hope you'll like it!

You can definitely subscribe, comment or even upvote~ XD

Enjoy~~~~

 

Credits to elf_verl, terehenwon999 and hikari_ryeowook for their OCs!

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SongLogie #1
can't wait for reading it. ahaha :)
ElfyPuhl
#2
Chapter 6: Who is the visitor???
elf_verl
#3
Awww! the party sounds like tremendous fun!! Can't wait to find out who the surprise guest is!!!!
ElfyPuhl
#4
Chapter 4: Hahaha! Gyuri and Ming were so funny! >D
elf_verl
#5
Chapter 4: HAHAA! Human Turtles lol... Yoorin is so strict! Haha
leetaerin29
#6
Chapter 3: wa~~ i miss your fanfics! ;)
waiting for the next chapter! fighting!
ElfyPuhl
#7
Chapter 3: Oh you went to ss5~

where's Kyu here?
elf_verl
#8
Chapter 3: Awww!! Gyu's sooooo cute!!

STALKERS!
nana_17 #9
Chapter 2: Hi there -waves hand- This is Nana, writing her review
So first thing first: I do really like the story poster. Thumbs up for that! Yay!
Now to the REAL Review:
I am going to point out pros and cons of this chapters.
So, pros first.
I like how you portrayed the characters, especially your own character Gyuri, I think that she is really perfect as Kyu's sister.
The flow of story is alright, it's readable for me. And it's straight to the point. It's not confusing.

Now, the cons:
The OC's. Beside Gyuri, whom is already a lead character in the fic, there's also four other OC in the story. It's... not appealing for me. I don't really like reading a story where there are many OC's involved. But that's just me. You can ignore that,
And.. that's it.
I don't actually find something negative in this story. But this type of story is not really my thing, I guess. So sorry about that. But I don't really like OC leading the story. Ahhhh, nevertheless, continue writing. This is just my opinion and in the end, you are the one who's doing the writing so... Good luck
elf_verl
#10
Chapter 2: Hi! Haha! Omo, Kyu and Gyu are so cute!!! Fighting over a shirt? My God!!! And Minnie is so sweet!!! Thank you for the update!