Author: fs1919

Title: Deficient

Genre: angst, fluff, vampire!au, multiple partners

Main Characters: OC, Yixing, Baekhyun

Current Number of Chapters: 3

Status: Completed

Summary:

Lee Sunhye always thought her constant fatigue, insomnia, and headaches were something she’d just have to live with. Besides, she’s a broke twenty-something year old who can’t afford doctor’s visits and she’s still alive, so, really, what’s the point? Then, she’s diagnosed with iron-deficiency anemia.

By a vampire who bit her in an alleyway behind a club.

A vampire who also, then, decides he’ll become her nutritionist-slash-affordable healthcare provider because he wants her blood to taste better.

She’s pretty sure she should have called ghostbusters or the Catholic Church the minute he proposed such an idea, but she’s just a tired twenty-something trying to survive and she’s not exactly opposed to a rich eccentric vampire buying all their groceries. Her boyfriend certainly doesn’t seem to mind.

Pro’s to the story: 

— To begin with, grammar and communication of character’s intent is amazing. I don’t believe I came across many typos, if there were any, and all sentences were easy to read and understandable — and that’s without a beta! So kudos to the author for that! I felt particularly, though, that the writing was just simply enjoyable, yet complex enough that you could find yourself diving further into the multiple topics explored, which was actually so pleasantly surprising to me as I first turned to this expecting a light and carefree read. I definitely think the author has a talent for communicating complex emotions and diverse, almost taboo, subjects in a unique and light manner that allows anyone to follow along, or even relate to!

— Character development, and plot development in general, is absolutely the gem of this narrative. There was only one unsatisfactory ele