FRIENDS' PLOT

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Hey Everyone!

 

MERRY CHRISTMAS!!

HAPPY NEW YEAR!!

 

Here comes a ONESHOT for fun! 

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SARANGHANDA!

2013 comes!

Foreword

 

Runa’s POV

 

Several months until we’ll be able to proceed and graduate.

 

Soon, we’ll be walking on an isle full of glitters and shines. The sound effects and background music will break our hearts. We will reminisce our past.

 

“Hhmmmmm……..I imagined this all my life! But, I’ve never been graced by an ounce of the feeling of love.

 

Will my last months end this way or will love find its way back to me? I want you back Luhan please just let me see you onemore time.”

 

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“Kai-oppa! Where are you going?” I asked him.

 

“None of your business, young lady!” He started the engine of his brand new motorbike and said.” Just joking, I have  my date don’t tell anyone okay?..Specially Mom! Bye little mushroom!”

 

“Yah! Kai-oppa! How about your photo-…..Nevermind!” I pouted.

 

 

 

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Luhan’s POV

 

How about the time when you are haunted by your past? The feelings loiter around every minute , every second.

 

Before you know it, everyone around vanishes. They’ll start to fade even so you kept on holding their hands. One by one till you are the only left in the world.

 

“Who could give me light on my darkness? Who could warm my frozen heart? Please come sooner. Sooner … or else I’ll soon give up.”

 

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“ Father! Stop building your expectations on me!” I tried to explain my point.

 

“Luhan , you know you’re the only heir of this company. I can’t let you go with them. You’re special. To 150 000 workers here, you WILL be the next leader.” Mr. Han strengthen his stand and left his son horrible.”I had no choice. I will eradicate them if you can’t do it.”

 

“Father! Don’t take them away! Don’t take her away!” I begged.

"Don't take Runa!" 

 

 

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-Onyuu
#1
Chapter 1: Hi, bb! HAHAHA! So okay, I finally got the time to read your fic, huzzah! o/ But I'll just send my comments and suggestions through PM okay? Because apparently, while I was typing here in the comments section, I reached 2000 characters already. OTL

This is a nice story, by the way! ^^ <3
Jazzly_Jung #2
Chapter 1: extraordinary family hahaa, its pretty much good, do really well in ur next fanfic, cant wait :-)
kriselynne
#3
Chapter 1: uhmmm funny! hahaha~~ but I felt the plot is fast? u.u I thought u will make it chapter but noo, only oneshot but this story is great! :D
kriselynne
#4
ok here I am~~ ready for readin' ur fanfic ㅋㅋㅋ
interesting~~ *smirks
shineeXexo
#5
Chapter 1: It's pretty good :D
It seems too be a bit rushed (in my opinion) but other than that it's really good^^
You should make it chaptered hehe
feizy187
#6
Chapter 1: what sneaky family and friends Runa and Luhan had XD

the story is good, but maybe the pace is too fast (?) it would maybe be easier to understand if the story is broken down into a few chapters. nontheless, the story is entertaining for me to read <3
darkmooncafe7
#7
I'm sorry!
I just write this story without seriously reviewing it..

My back hurts so...
I am ,maybe, a FAILURE!