[One-Shot] 6 Words That Hurt

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How can you say it’s over when your boyfriend is deeply in love with you?
…feelings change… and love just leaves…

Foreword

Hello readers! This is Asian_Innocence with my new - old -which ever you look at it one shot.

If you are one of my old readers, then you know my style of writings, and if you aren't - well, I guess you'll find out. ^-^ Please bear with me, because I tend to write LONG chapters in my fanfics. My one-shots are no different.

This one shot, 'Six Words That Hurt' is one of my very favorites I have written. I'm used to writing romance and happy endings, and this will be my first to write something not so romantic with a sad ending. This one-shot is a part of my 'When the Sky Cries - One Shot Collection' on Winglin. Since Winglin has been down, I decided to post it up on this sight. Most of my stories are PG-13 and anything rated, I'll give you a heads up. ^-^

Comments are loved and adored, so PLEASE DON'T BE A SILENT READER. Any crticism or comments is welcomed and will really help me improve on my writing.

Not to spoil anything, but at the end of the one-shot, where MiRoo and her Umma are speaking - please note that her Umma's calmness is a trait that most Asian parents possess. Most Asian parents don't like to show their emotions, and that is how I portrayed her Umma. Just a little side note~ >w<

Also, there is two versions of this one-shot - I recommend reading the second one which can be found in "Final".

So please Enjoy! ^-^

 

Copyright© August2008. All rights reserved ‘6 Words That Hurt’ by Asian_Innocence. Distribution of any kind is prohibited without the written consent of Asian_Innocence.

***This is a FANFICTION, it's not real. There are some reference to real life events and situations that are relevent to FT Island. I do NOT claim rights to those events and situations and the celebrities I mentioned.

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tsunderekko #1
Chapter 1: Awww I remember reading this oneshot when I first became a Pri and it broke me! Ugh I still love this oneshot.
Asian_Innocence #2
Chapter 4: People have asked me about the meaning of the last 6 words that hurt. I like to imagine that JongHoon wrote that letter as a mushy, but silly note that he scribbled during one of their dates a long time ago. I don't think he meant it literally at all, at least when he first wrote.

However, I think towards the end - he meant it literally. I'd like to imagine that JongHoon was in critical condition - just like MiRoo, but didn't have the will to fight for his life anymore, because he lost his love. I think he just gave up in the end, and died before MiRoo woke up.
EXOISMYSTYLE023 #3
Chapter 4: Right when is found out he died, I knew I couldn't hold back the tears. I've been struck by this story's powerful plot. "Without your love, I would die." I sobbed so much at that part!!! This story is very amazing and touching. <3
gail129 #4
Chapter 4: I really love this oneshot fanfic it is so touching said and amazing..... i read this fanfic like a million times
Myumeful #5
It took me a quite long time to realize the meaning. I'm shocked.<br />
The words are so strong. You should write more things like this! I loved it, and not just because you used my bias.
goginiku #6
I think the second version is better. It's more expressive. But both are good. I really love this story. I will never forget this beautifully written love story^^
goginiku #7
Such a powerful one-shot. Really impressive. I love it...
milchan253 #8
Whoa>__< Good story! So sad T.T and the poster, is awesome^^!!
Made-of-hope #9
Such a beautiful one shot... it really touched me... I really like the final version better... i felt there was more heart... Anyway, thank you and it was wonderful <3<br />
ThePowerChaserToYou #10
Nice one shot^^
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