FIRST IN LOVE

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this is my first novel for my chingu here!!
i hope you like this and please leave your comment, i will make it better if there something wrong about the story or the plot about this story! hehehe

 

 

a story that tells a love triangle, a girl were finalized by his lover in cause her lover has had a scandal. due to the results of her lover she tried to commit suicide on a bridge, but his intentions could be in the top boughs were concerns two young men considerate enough. how will the next story is going to continue her intention? or he is trying to change a new life?

 

Foreword

 

Title : first in love

Casting : yang yoseob,lee taemin, choi minho and IU

Place : bridge,home, restaurant and gimpo factory

 

At Naengmyeon (real restaurant)

IU and Choi Minho meeting between ago is a beautiful memoriesbut is no longer the beautiful memeories, that shattered all after Choi Minho found deceive

IU all happened when he found hang out with another female.

 

Choi minho  :  let’s end it here, I will let you go forever. [ not facing IU face ]

IU     : ne! let’s end it here! [ run away from choi minho ]

 

Tears fall down,she never knew that he will be broke up with Choi Minho. When she arriving at the bridge, IU thought of committing suicide there,but there is some one was watching  IU after arguing with her ​​boyfriend, worried about the young lady both of young men follow her behind.

 

IU : it’s better I’m die!! [ standing and shouting ]

Yang yoseob & lee taemin : hey! Young lady..! don’t do that.. all would not be meaningful, you think he will come back to be together again with you?  [ yang yoseob and taemin try to convey IU]

IU  : who are you?! Why do you care about me!!  [ cries ]

Lee taemin : look young lady!  Where not care about you,but we care about you life!  [ try to get close with IU ]

IU  : don’t get closed!  [trying to climb the fence of the bridge.]

Yang yoseob  : don’t climb that fence!  [ jump to IU ]

Lee taemin : yoseob hyung!!  [ jump to IU too ]

IU  : “ suddenly fainted “  

Yang Yoseob : what should we do? [ he ask  taemin ]

Lee taemin : she didn’t bring her ID or HP [ blur face ]

Yang yoseob  : we should bring her  to our house [ lift up IU ]

Lee taemin : yes! [ helping yang yoseob lift up IU]

 

After a few days, IU wake up to face the reality, yang yoseb and lee taemin only can see the sad face from IU.

 

Lee taemin : oh! You wake up already?? [ bring a soup ]

IU  : “nod” I’m so sorry to make a trouble for you two [ not facing yang yoseob and taemin face ]

Yang yoseob  :  never mind… please take care of yourself   [ make hiself busy ]

Lee taemin : here.. let’s have your porridge now [ give the porridge to IU ]

IU : wow.. look so delicious, you cook it by yourself? [ ask IU ]

Lee taemin : ne, majayo!! I cook it by myself  [ taemin answer  with his cute face ]

IU : wow so delicious!! Can I ask both of your name? [ smile to yoseob and taemin ]

Lee taemin : I’m lee taemin but you can call me taemin and over there is yang yoseob you can call his name yoseob [ pointed to yoseob ]

IU : my name is Lee jieun call me IU [ stand up and bow to yoseob and taemin ]

Yang yoseob : yes, I think it’s time for you to back home.. your family will be worries [ say it slowly to IU ]

Lee taemin : yoseob hyung.. why you say like that! [ closed IU ears ]

IU : ne~~ I will go now.. I’m okey taemin ssi.  [ stand up and prepare herself to going out ]

Lee taemin : no, don’t go IU ssi stay a few days more with me and yoseob  [ hold IU hands ]

Yang yoseob : we should let her go back to her familys  [ pull taemin body ]

 

 

IU walk into the infront door and say good bye  to lee taemin and  yang yoseob for the last time.

 

IU : thank you again for let me her and carring me, I will pay you someday [ tears want to fall ]

Lee taemin : yoseob hyung..! stop her  [ pull yoseob hand to stop IU from go ]

Yang yoseob : we cant stop her.. ! maybe she have family, now they must be worry about her [ try to make taemin understand ]

Lee taemin : yoseob hyung, you are so cruel..! even she have family out  there she not well now.. mybe she can back home after one week or after she feeling well hyung! [ sensitive boy and  more care about IU feeling ]

IU : jalga~~ see you again lee taemin ssi and yang yoseob ssi [ bow ]

Yang yoseob : jakka..jakkaman IU ssi…. Taemin said you still not feeling well, so I will let you stay with us a few more days. [say the words with not facing IU face ]

Lee taemin : hyung..!! I know you will say that [ run to IU ]

IU : jinjja?? Can I stay a few day here..? [ jumping together with taemin ]

Lee taemin : yes…!! [ jumping ]

Yang yoseob : yes.. you may stay here a few days more, with one condition..! [ evil smile ]

IU and  Lee taemin : mwo??! [ stop from jumping ]

Yang yoseob : help us cook and wash our clothes [ laugh ]

IU : beautifull…. [ shining eyes ]

Lee taemin : what?? What is beautifull??  [ wondering what is beautifull ]

IU : ani…aniyo, yoseob ssi.. don’t worry I will do what ever you say [ answer with shining eyes]

Yang yoseob : ne~~ my heartbeat is fast  [ talk himself cause  impress with IU ssi face ]

 

 

Yang yoseob feel something awkward feeling and he wondering what was happen to his heart so fast. Lee taemin and IU have a chemistry but yang yoseob didn’t know where to start the conversation with IU. After a few weeks past  IU, lee taemin and yang yoseob became more closely.

 

Lee taemin :  IU unni.. I will go first, see you dinner time [ bow and going to work immediately ]

Yang yoseob : IU ssi.. im going first..! please take care of our house [ while correct his shirt and necktie ]

IU : let me help you.... [ touch yoseob necktie and correcting yoseob ]

Yang yoseob : my heartbeat! so sick to stand about my heart !! [ pull his necktie ]

IU : why?? [ panic ]

Yang yoseob : nothing.. jalga.. annyeong [ faster going out from the house ]

IU : ne~~ annyeongihaseyo [ only watch him going out ]

 

Usually IU will not clean up the house first before going out to buy vegetables and fruits  but she not doing it as usuall,she clean up all the tidy place at the house.  Suddenly there was a man entered the house grabbing IU mouth. The man  tie IU hands and kidnap her and leave a note for lee taemin and yang yoseob.

 

The note simply like this “if you guys want this girl in safe, please do not contact the police. tried to save him if you can come at gimpo factory  before midnightfrom the man.

 

Lee taemin : im home.. IU ssi this all I buy for our dinner tonight [ bring the ingredients to kitchen ]

Yang yoseob : annyeonghaseyo.... [ bring something for IU ]

But the house still quite, yoseob and taemin feel strange about that they try to find IU all the space at the house.

Lee taemin : yoseob hyung! Faster here! [ point to the notes ]

Yang yoseob : mwo!! IU being kidnap [ panic reaction ]

Lee taemin : kidnap?? [ fall down because of the situation ]

Yang yoseob : I will go first! Taemin stay at this house [ faster going out ]

Lee taemin : ani..! aniyo..! it so dangerous hyung, let me follow you [ walk together ]

Yang yoseob : ne!! faster already late.... [ start the car and push the pedal oil so hard ]

 

 

Lee taemin and Yang yoseob only quite worries if there something happen to IU, lee taemin almost cry when he think about IU safety. At gimpo factory IU still faint not  wake up. The man who kidnap her always touch IU face and her lip.

 

 

Choi minho : why??! You accept our  broke up ? [ kiss her lip ]

IU : nuguesoyo?! Who is that?? [ her eyes still blur ]

Choi minho : finally! IU my love you already wake up [ hugging her ]

IU :  let me go!! Please let me go!! [ cry loudly ]

Choi minho : I will let you go.. if you come back to me again [ sad face ]

IU : ani..aniyo!! I don’t want to back again with you! Jebal....! let me go now! [ cry and panic ]

Choi minho : why?? It must be the boys right?? [ angry with IU ]

IU : please let me go! Lee taemin! Yang Yoseob! where are you guys, please save me now [ cry and cry ]

Choi minho : they will come here before the midnight, I hope they can find you here or mybe they already die!! [ evil laugh ]

IU : what are you saying??! It cant be happen!! [ panic and now worry about taemin and yoseob ]

 

Choi minho his ex boyfriend cant accept that they was already broke up, its happen a few weeks ago, its all because of choi minho have another girlfriend. IU cant stand up with his behaviour and make decision to broke up with him.

 

Choi  minho : please stay by  my side IU..! you the only one I need!!  [  hold IU hands and give a kiss at his cheek  ]

IU : I cant stay with you side..! cause I already have the first love with someone [ tears falling down hardly  ]

Choi minho : no..! no..!! you cant in love with someone accept me! [close his ears]

IU : it is true!! Im in love with him!! My first love !!  [smile when she remember about yoseob ]

Choi minho : no..! [ shouting ]

IU : yes..! i in love with that boy Yoseob!! I feel so great when I say it [ happy and smiling ]

Lee taemin : IU.....!! where are you?? [shouted when he try to find IU ]

Before IU and choi minho have a fighting taemin and yoseob has split up to find IU, yoseob hear what was has say by IU. In this situation yoseob feel so glad and happy that IU also in love with him.

IU : taemin...! im here..! [ shout out loudly  to make sure taemin can find her ]

Lee taemin : there you are..!  [ try to untie IU ]

Choi minho : you cant take away my love! [ stand up and try to hit taemin with wood ]

IU : be carefull taemin!! [ shouting ]

 

Yang yoseob try to save taemin from choi minho. Yoseob  push minho body from attack taemin.

Choi minho : so you are the one  stole my IU from me!!  [ laughing with angry ]

Yang yoseob : please stop this right now!! [ try to calm down ]

Choi minho : what??? Stop!! It will when me already die [ laughing ]

Yang yoseob : please!! It was no useless, she already not in love with you anymore [ try to make the situation in calm down mood ]

Choi  minho : shut up! You talk to much! [ attack yoseob ]

 

Minho start to attack yoseob, IU and teamin only can watch it. After both of them tired minho surrender and run away from them. Yoseob only sleep at floor because his almost lost energy fight with minho.

 

Lee taemin : yoseob hyunng! Are you okey?? [ taers about to falling down ]

IU : are okey?? [ worries ]

Yang yoseob : im okey.... please dont worry about me.. [ fainted cause lost his energy ]

Lee taemin : hyung....! wake up!! [ tears falling down ]

IU : please! Wake up! [ cry ]

After the incident lee taemin Yang yoseob and IU became more closely, IU already tell about her family because of the car accident IU lose her mom and his dad she live alone before she see with lee taemin and yang yoseob.

 

Lee taemin : I will take care of you unni.. [ hug for comfort iu feelings ]

IU : ne~~ kamshamnida, I will take care of you too [ hug taemin back ]

Lee taemin : ne! I will take care of you, cause I have feeling too for you, but I know u will never love me back but your love is only for my yoseob hyung. [ cry in his heart ]

 

After taemin comfort iu feeling, iu going to find yoseob at the park, today IU will told her feelings to yoseob. IU walk so faster because she to excited to tell the truth.

IU : yoseob ssi... you are here [ sit beside yoseob ]

Yang yoseob : ne~~ weiyo?? [ try not to know anything ]

IU : I have something to tell you... [ pink face ]

Yang yoseob : what? [ not facing IU face ]

IU : its was my first time to say this, I cant control my feeling and behaviour [ try so hard to continue what she wanna say ]

 

Suddenly yang yoseob face to IU face.

 

Yang yoseob : I know what you trying to say, cause I heard what you say when we at gimpo factory [touch her lips ]

IU :  “nod” [ tears start to fall ]

Yang yoseob : because you are the one, who make me have feeling to in love for the first time. [ yoseob kiss IU lips ]

IU and yang yoseob became are couple, lee taemin always pray for their happiness.

 

 

The end

By seobio hojun

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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