E and Ahna's Review Shop [[OPEN]]

Description

A simple yet harsh fanfiction critique shop. We review you on your writing, style, and development and solely on those four. We care nothing for your presentation, but for your writing. Send us your fic and we'll critique it to the best of our abilities~

Foreword

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deductionmaniac #1 May 30, 2015 12:02:15

hi would u mind reviewing this one shot for me? here's the link http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/956279/first-love-angst-dara-donghae-oneshot-sad-kimjinwoo-jinwoodara

thanks!

chodoiino #2 Oct 10, 2014 04:02:25

Chapter 16: hi! i would like to note that hermaphrodite is actually the very wrong word to considering your description of it being "someone who has both es." its considered a slur (, , n***a etc) because of the fact that most people assume that it is someone who has both es, but i digress. Just pointing it out.

illumina_dain #3 Jun 2, 2014 08:42:11

Chapter 1: Hi, would you mind giving review to my story?
Here is the link
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/706970/

It's an on-going story and I accept harsh review. It is rated M because of language, not (not yet)
Thank you

Miawitch_1002 #4 Apr 29, 2014 06:08:25

can i submit another fic to be reviewed? i'm pleased with ur reviews because its honest ^^

Boshaft_Crow #5 Apr 13, 2014 11:35:19

Chapter 1: Hello, can you review this oneshot please ? http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/644818/happily-ever-after-oneshot-romance-exo-chen
Thank you :)

GybzyXiao #6 Mar 22, 2014 20:09:13

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/670879/crooked-road-2ne1-bigbang-skydragon-exo-luhan-sehun-baekhyun

Heya , can you please do me a review ^^ would you mind doing a review for my foreword too. Btw it contain rated m . This fanfic is currently in complete. I accept harsh criticism so don't worry . I won't be offended ^^

vvipforseungri #7 Feb 8, 2014 16:35:13

Chapter 3: YO. THIS ISH BE SEEMINGLY FANTASTIC. Do you know how hard it is to find quality review shops tho.

What say you about fics not on AFF? If it's a no, I wouldn't mind a review on: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/141622/1.

ShineexoWorld #8 Jan 23, 2014 02:59:24

Chapter 19: Thanks for spending so much time on the my review. ^^ hehe I know its bad, just wanted to see where i can improve. I'm terrible at writing god I dont know how to let the story flow, I really tried but guss it didnt work out *sigh* oh well thx anyways. I wasnt really think much when I wrote it, something out of bordern. haiz terrible terrible terrible><

iLuvYesung #9 Jan 22, 2014 23:56:26

Chapter 14: I've read my review! Thank you once again for taking the trouble to read and review it! Yes, and thirteen is an awesome number, lol.

oh, but one more thing. I never explained this or pointed it out in the author's notes, but did you realize something about the time space continum thing and Tao being the one who did it? I'm not really sure if anyone actually understood that reference, now that i think of it.