Chapter 1: This was really quite amazing (: And beautifully written too!
I was scared at some bits :P
But yay for Tao! I was so glad he was really brave!
Oh! and his alarm :L I've not seen anyone on this who know who avenged sevenfold are too :P
It's really great!

Chapter 1: Wasn't there a house like that? I recall reading about it in class! (or with my sister....)
I really like this! It's very well written! ^_^

Chapter 1: Asdgafdgaf so in the end tao helps to free dbsk. *u*

Chapter 1: I like it so much :3
You write really good :) Only one thing I want to say, I would have put more on the banishing than one sentence :) But other than that it was really nice.

Chapter 1: That was captivating! And go Tao for conquering his fears~ Aww YooSu and YunJae couple *___*

Chapter 1: Honestly im seriously asdfghjklasdfghjklasdfghjkl over the dbsk's parts.i feel like screaming!!!!omg this is so good!!