Chapter 2: Most stories try to put self-loathing in a tragically beautiful manner,yours doesn't. And that's what's so amazing about it. It delivers the point across perfectly and precisely. It also relates to Bom in real life, with the many surgery rumours, you can't help but wonder how she pulls confidence off so easily. All in all, your story is realistically true and doesn't try to be something it isn't.

Chapter 2: I. Like. This. Story.
It truly is quite a different image - different tone by how she is portrayed and it made me wonder if Bommie ever thought of it this way.