Pulsus in Insania {--skyisthelimitwritingcontestentry

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 {  pulsus ininsania-----

                 title: pulsus in insania//pushed into insanity

                 author: K_I_M_C_H_I

                 date arrived on earth: december 3, 2012

                 genre: suspense, angst, oneshot, drabble

                 length: oneshot; word-count 1,479

                 main character: kim misoo (OC)

{--prompt no.  1 ; "sometimes i think the human heart is just a simple shelf.                                                                                                                                                                                                 there's only so much you can pile onto it before something falls off an edge                                                                                                                                                                                                      and you are left to pick up the pieces." --from house rules by jodi picoult

 

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layout credit @ joanne200969 at f a l l e n angel.)

 
                                                    

Foreword

{  the author's heart-----

hiyo. so as you can see, i've decided to enter this little oneshot in the sky is the limit writing contest for subround one of round two. i feel like nobody else is going to write something similar to what i've got, so yay! but i could be wrong, so i guess i'll just have to wait and see. this is really a new form and style of writing for me, too. i've been reading a bunch of horror stories/creepypasta as of late and i guess that's what really inspired me to come up with this type of a story. it wasn't as hard as i thought to pretend to be this girl--this insane woman. i'll stop spoiling things now and let you guys read. feedback is welcome, whether it be positive or crtitical or negative.

 

{  allthatotherinfo-----

           round start: december 2nd, 12:00 am est
                round end: december 16th, 12:00 am est
               

layout credit @ joanne200969 at f a l l e n angel.)

 
                                                                                              "  i'm the normal one.  therestofyouareinsane."
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-ashes #1
Chapter 1: Yes. Just yes.

This is what I've been looking for. A story looking inside the mind of a maniac.

I love how you made it seem that Misoo was all innocent and naive like a child and that she couldn't even comprehend herself when she did things sometimes. I feel that it displays that she's a murderer without even knowing it sometimes.

The limited vocabulary was wonderful also. It really gave you a sense that she was in a child-like state of mind and was just like a child in which she acts on her instincts when shown those pictures.

This was wonderful to read.
joycehhh #2
Chapter 1: Woah. I found your story on the contest :3
Jaejoong is not even my bias lol but I like this a lot! Though the foreword was kind of confusing..
Subscribed! And good luck ^^
JustDerpin #3
It's so well written~ I like it! It made me a bit tensed and edgy~ but, that's what it makes the story so awesome! The girl is just so aasdfghjkl;' her personality is really of an insane person o.o Good job author-nim! ^.^
LadyCorn #4
Chapter 1: Points for a sociopath with aegyo! HAHA
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