Line Had Drawn Between Us

Description

Tian Fu Zhen, Aaron Yan's ex-girlfriend dated him for money and hence, they break up but Aaron was deeply hurt. FuZhen gone missing right after the break-up. One year later, two girls transfer to this university where Aaron and his friends were there. Hebe and FuZhen look so alike that everybody mistoken her as FuZhen, and because of this, she was always hurt by Aaron. As he know more about Hebe, he noticed both of their personality is far apart and slowly, he start to develop some kind of special feeling for her.

Foreword

A/N: Before i start the foreword, i need to remind you guys to take note something. This fanfic had been posted in winglin, it's around chapter 14 now but i'll change some of the things and chapters will certainly be longer than it is in winglin. But most of the detail will remain expect for the foreword. :P Hope you guys can support my story either here or in winglin. Thank you!

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Hebe Chen Jia Qi - Had a older sister, Ella Chen Jia Hua and their sister's relationship is very close although they do bicker sometimes. She's cheerful and kind, always put others before self. She doesn't remember her childhood at all but all she care was the present so she didn't try to find out either. Have a scar on her back which she didn't even know where it comes from.

Aaron Yan Ya Lun - He hate Tian Fu Zhen with all his might because to him, she was just a that use love to cheat money. He was once a happy and caring guy yet everything change when FuZhen leave him. Bestfriend with Jiro and Chun and goodfriend with Jiro's girlfriend, Selina.

Ella Chen Jia Hua - Dote on her sister, Hebe alot. She will does everything to protect her. She hate it when people call her a tomboy.

Wu Zun (Chun) - Protective towards Aaron ever since his break-up with FuZhen because he know that he had a fragile heart. He can be understanding and annoying at time.

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Tian Fu Zhen and Aaron Yan was the most lovely couple in the campus. They have been dating for two year when SOMETHING changed it totally... which left Aaron with a broken heart and he turns to a cold and mean guy from then on. He learnt not to trust anybody easily expect Jiro and Chun. He hates FuZhen to the core, blaming her of what happen.

One year later, two girls which named Hebe and Ella came into the campus. Aaron, Jiro, Chun and Selina was very shocked when they saw Hebe, she looked excatly like Aaron's heartless ex-girlfriend, FuZhen but Hebe was prettier with her short bob hairstyle which make her look very cute.

Aaron thought Hebe was FuZhen intially but as time get longer, Aaron curiousity grew deeper and he always tried to get near to Hebe and fall in love with her unknownly. From his information, FuZhen and Hebe personailty was completely different. One was kind and caring yet another was ty and mean. Hebe can also plays piano and basketball very well which FuZhen hates. Slowly, Aaron believed there is really two person in the world who look at least 90% alike.

but what if, a line was drawn between them, making them suffer and couldn't get together,
will they be able to cope it, especially when problem arise one after another....

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P/S: Hebe is named Chen Jia Qi here because Ella is Chen Jia Hua. :D HAHA, comment okay. :D

Happiness's production @ 2010

 

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Sincera #1
Chapter 16: Take the time you need. I will wait to read. No worries! :)
XiaoZhen
#2
When are you going to update?? It's been so long already
grace_leeu #3
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SpeechofSilence
#4
Ohhh, so who is Wu Chun. Why does it seem like Wu Chun is hiding something? A bitter sweet memory, perhaps? Or just bitter sweet because she can't remember him?<br />
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I can't even drink tablets! I don't like tablets! I'm scared of them! There was this one time when I had to drink a medicine issued by some children's hospital. It was a tablet so my Mum painstakingly dissolved it for me each morning. <br />
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Ah, so cute! "His left hand is holding onto her shoulder whereas another is wrapping around her waist." Of course Hebe would blush! That just passes the personal space boundary.<br />
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Ella, ah, always the violent one. Well, I suppose Wu Chun deserves the punch...
mtrueninja
#5
Omgg. Chun likes Ella, sort of confess it.. BUT! Ella is quite clueless? Aww Chunnie! It's okay! It's okay! haha. (:<br />
Aaron's and Hebe's relationship is so.. bipolar. lmbo if that can happen! seriously.. Is it just me, one minute THEY ARE SO CUTE AND SWEET. another minute, WTH *smack* lol!<br />
It's okay though. I like it! haha. (:
Happiness #6
Thanks for the comment, people! It really motivates me alot! Please do keep commenting! (: Will reply the next time round, sorry!
SpeechofSilence
#7
Of course, the way he is treating Mike is because of you. Obvious much? He doesn't even know himself. Man, that guy is an idiot.<br />
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So, what will happen between Ella and Wu Chun? Will they make up and be a couple or would Ella just hate Wu Chun even more? But, hah, Jerry Yan. Ella was never yours in the first place so stop hoping. <br />
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It seems as though Hebe and Aaron's relationship has gotten better over time. Hebe IS adorable so you used the right word, Aaron. Don't worry, you ain't weird.<br />
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Haha, yep, a sweet chapter, very sweet in comparison to the others, of course.
vic2ry98 #8
yay!! u updated! thnx <br />
keep on updating JIA YOU!! ^_^
mtrueninja
#9
omgg! haha! BeBu so cute! haha! Hebe! Aaron gave her a piggy back! cute.. ME NEXT! lol!<br />
Ahh!!!!! Chun admit it! He's jealous! HE ADMIT THAT HE'S JEALOUS! Sweet. haha~ I want to know Ella's reaction now! xDD<br />
Haha, STALKER. lol; I'm on winglin usually school nights. lmao;