Japonica Glistens in the Morning Breeze [Drabble]

Description

In which Kim Minseok is madly in love with Kim Jongdae.

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So recently, my writing has been bland as hell. To me, that is. I could write as much as I wanted, but I just found that what I was writing wasn't very descriptive and as well written as it could be. So yeah, that bothered me a lot. In an attempt to help my writing/practice writing(?) I had my family come up with a single sentence of anything they could think of~.
My mom's: Japonica glistens in the morning breeze.

To be honest, when I thought about writing this, I had a completely different idea of what I wanted to write..and then I began writing at 2am and this came out! It's not finished yet, I just have to wrap things up and organise it a bit 'cause it'll need some editing but hopefully it will be out this weekend! ^-^
While it's not nearly where I want my writing to be, I think it's definitely better than the few stories I have on here~

Foreword

"I love you, Jongdae-ah~" Minseok hummed into the other's ear, as the pad of his thumb gently traced the younger man's prominent cheekbone. "My heart burns only for you... Because you're mine. Just mine." His eyes wandered across Jongdae's sleeping form, watching the steady rise and fall of his chest and a pleased smile crept onto his face. Gently, he pulled up the comforter to make sure his love would be comfortable. "Sleep peacefully." Minseok whispered while his fingers brushed against Jongdae's dark brown locks before standing from his seat on the edge of the bed and exiting the room. He walked down the hallway, taking his time and glancing at the portaits on the walls. Upon entering the kitchen, he noted the time, drank a glass of water, and pushed a handle on his way to the front door. Minseok fumbled with the zipper of his jacket and exhaled a heavy sigh as he finally exited the house he had become so familiar with.

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It's almost ready to be posted!

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wonus
#1
Chapter 1: Oh god minseok :o i thought this was an angst but didnt expect this tho :/ but anyway this is interesting /thumbs up/
Eyes_Of_Oblivion
#2
Thank you everyone! ^-^ I'm glad you like it? Haha or were creeped out by it...?
I think the way I see it in my head it that Minseok was so madly in love with his friend Chen that he killed him because Chen wasn't interested in him and was dating a girl/ planning to get married to her. So he figured if he couldn't have Chen, no one could.
EXOtic-bear
#3
Chapter 1: Why did he do that......
turtlejusz #4
Chapter 1: waah! Thats creEpy~ bUt its a woNdErful plot~ xiuchen~
turtlejusz #5
Chapter 1: waah! Thats creEpy~ bUt its a woNdErful plot~ xiuchen~
vannina66
#6
xiuchen! <3

looking frward to the first chapter! :D

update soon please! :3