the scar in my heart is you

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love

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I’m not the best writer when I come to writing so please bear with my writing skills

It’s ! So if you don’t like reading boy boy actions then don’t read any further!

I at grammar and spilling to so I'll try to avoid theme but if you fund some just now that I did try my best

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Foreword

Jae joong and yunho use to be lovers for awhile they were happy  but yunho made a huge mistake leaving  jae with a huge scar on his heart, after yunho left jae find  out that he's pregnant but decide not to tell yunho he believe that yunho doesn't deserve to know, can jae forgive yunho , can the baby bring them together what is faith has plan for theme

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kristalesa #1
Chapter 26: and yeah... she had returned. had to re-read from chap 1 to reminisce the plot ^^ still some words were quite confusing that I had ro think twice as ti what it means. Perhaps you can get a beta-reader? This story is too beautiful that it would be a waste not to be shared to more readers, right?
sunshineonu #2
Chapter 26: yep it's time for siwon to move on from jae..
sunshineonu #3
Chapter 26: woww..thank you dear author..
reading it right now.
sunshineonu #4
dear author..
can we hope for an update for this lovely fic..
pls don't abandon ..
Graciela24 #5
Chapter 2: Te puedo decir que en mi opinión escribes bien y tu historia es Linda,gracias.
kristalesa #6
Your story is very good that’s why imp sticking up with it. It is simple yet very interesting. I may have pity siwon since he had been harboring feelings for jae for quite some time but I am happy that you are kind enough to give him a very good partner. If you want to lengthen your story more and had ran out of conflict, try bringing yunjae’s mom back. I will be waiting for the next update ^.^
kristalesa #7
You really have problems with the grammar that the reader tends to misunderstand some scenes and take a lot of time to comprehend what was happening but then again, every writer starts with grammar and spelling difficulties. Just keep on writing and make sure to read articles about the usages of words. You always mistake broke for brock and others. Read the dictionary handbook and don’t be too harsh on yourself. Take it easy and in due time, you may be able to perfect it. Before posting your story, try to encode it using the Microsoft office word first. It will help you correct your mistakes.
Willidingding #8
great story :)
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