Darkness

Tears of a Phoenix

You take a step back. Jongup is not the person you thought he would be. Your anger is the thing that motivates you so much to keep walking away. ‘Wait!’ called Jongup. He reached out to pull you back, but you turn around by instincts and slap his arm away. ‘Leave me alone,’ you growl with all the anger you can muster.

You want the normal Jongup back; the one who smiled at you happily as he helped you up, when you fainted. He was like your best friend that you made in a few hours. But now, before your own two eyes, he was drenched in evil; deep, black eyes staring into your own.

You turn around again and keep walking. ‘You think that I will let you get away so easily?’ sneered Jongup. A black tentacle that seemed to extend from the slash in his arm speeded forward, grabbing you. ‘You, I will never let you go,’ he whispered.

You shiver; you have this bad feeling that he was going to do something terrible to you.  ‘Think of yourself as my dinner for tonight. Don’t worry; you won’t feel a thing…’

A split second later, you are plunged into a stinky, black darkness. The ground is rock solid but the mass surround you felt slippery. You stay there forever, maybe for eternity. The last thing you remember is two red, glowing eyes staring at you in anger.

The End. :3

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Jungkoyoung #1
OMG wow… I'm wooooow……
PuffyBunnyIsLazy
#2
Chapter 53: What can I say? This is incredibly awesome! I loved it so much! The craziness, dramaticness (is that even a word?), epicness are all so incredible!! Good job :D
-Star-Ra- #3
Chapter 1: I choose jongup
hambrejoyce #4
Chapter 53: wow that was crazy
I can't even
wow
justkeeponswimming
#5
Create more tabs, so more people can subscribe, and it's be easier to find~
But all in all
It's really good~
It's really dramatic and epic, but sometimes a little too dramatic but thats alright~
I really enjoyed it~
shayleely #6
Omg your story is so dramatic and epic HAHAHAHAH
eunki_kim #7
Chapter 7: Ok..I don't know what to choose..between believe that Yongguk is a nice guy or believe Daehyun is the right one... Please help me choose!!!!!!
juju95lc #8
This story is really good *o*!!! I think, I will keep the end story with Daehyun is my brother x)!!! it's a Happy ending no ? xD!!! I hope you make another story :p!!
JongHaNa
#9
Chapter 53: LOL!!! congrats on finishing!!!
I enjoyed half of it (since I also have been lazy)
It was good and I hope you make another story.