Time's Up

Description

She couldn't help the sad thoughts that rushed through her head.

How she will eventually have to say goodbye to everything she'd grown so close too~

Then the door opened.

 

He was finally back.

Foreword

Hi!

So this is my first story.

Ever.

I hope you like it! ^^

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CharismaticFlameB-3 #1
Chapter 1: wow.
this is crap.
lols.
KeybumKim #2
( /Comments on RP account because Inocurr about how weird that is.

OKAY HAYLEY LOOK HERE I COMMENTED



Personally? I'm not a fan of those kinds of fics in general, nor do I like the vagueness-- But I understand that was your intention, so interpretation was open to others.

On another scale, or just in general, I thought your words, and your metaphors were placed well.
The dialogue? A bit weak, weird, but it still works well.


.u . Good job though! )
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