Chapter Thirty - Heartbeat

Mischief and Love

His head laid on Minho’s chest as he listened to the steady heartbeat. The elder man was asleep, and Taemin let a soft sigh slip past his lips as he curled closer, trying to will the tears away. Tears of happiness. Maybe he was being too emotional; but the feeling of actually knowing Minho held the same feelings and emotions for him was so overwhelming.

So many things had changed after the day Minho announced he was dating Yuri. Jonghyun and Key were together now, developing slowly but surely. Kai somehow got into a relationship with Kyungsoo. But Onew was.. still eating chicken and laughing at his own jokes. It was okay though. Everyone was happy, and he cant stop the smile spreading through his face as cuddles warm and close, feeling content in the arms of the elder man, warmth spreading through his heart and bringing that prickling feeling in his eyes again.

He doesn’t know what will happen in the future; what hardships and pain they might have to endure. But as he listens to the steady rhythm of Minho’s heart close against his ear, he knows they will make it. Because he has Minho, and really, he can’t ask for anything more.

 

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A/N: For a while now, I was seriously wondering how I could do the ending to this. The last two chapters were pretty much the ending, but I wanted to officially finish this fic off, so that's why it's so short. I don't want to add unnecessary words and drag it out longer and stuff ;_; So I hope you guys are okay with this. I just want to portray Taemin's happiness really.

OKAY HERE COMES THE MUSHY LOVE AND THANKS! WOOOP

obviously thank you all. for supporting this story till the beginning to now. ya'll have been so nice and sweet and lovely. your comments make me smile and i feel so unexplainably happy reading the lovely things you say! :D this was my first fic on AFF and it makes me wanna sob because I never expected to get this much love. BUT I AM SO GRATEFUL AND I LOVE YOU ALL.

even though i'm a lame, lousy lazy author you guys still bother to even read my updates. and i thank you for that. /bows and sniffles :'(

one certain person I really have to thank is this woman Vahn. our friendship started because of this fic and she is the one who gives me inspiration to even update at my lazy times. so a huge bootiful thanks to her, my beautiful soik. <33333

 

THANK YOU GUYS. THIS FEELS LIKE THE GRAMMY AWARDS I SWEAR. BUT NO SERIOUSLY I LOVE YOU. T___T 

thank you for your support!

 

 

 

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2min1212
#1
Chapter 30: I read in one go and I love itttt
MrsLeeTaemin
#2
Chapter 24: MAN EVERYONE IS JUST TING ON TAEMIN.
MrsLeeTaemin
#3
Chapter 20: BRUH. I've always wanted to go cliff diving.
MrsLeeTaemin
#4
Chapter 17: Seeing a gif of baby Minho has cured all of my problems.
MrsLeeTaemin
#5
Chapter 2: This story is such a flashback omg.
InMemoryofJonghyun
#6
Chapter 30: Nice story you got here. I read it all in one go throughout the night. I was going to go to to sleep at 2am damnit! Oh well, at least it had a happy ending.
You did the tension build perfectly btw, though the actual I found to be a bit lacking. I also would have liked more wrap up in the last chapter. It feels unfinished to me, rushed.

But I have to today I love the badass chapter. That moment where Taemin has a cheering team in head to say he's so ing awesome, it's hilarious. I could just see a stadium of people just going wild in his head... It's a really funny mental image.
The jongkey ending was more satisfying to me than the 2min one. Because the 2min one felt very easy. It was literally them saying I love you and getting together. Jongkey had more of a fight, which settled everything. But with the 2min one I would would have liked them to be more desperate. Taemin actually apologizing for the plan and not telling him, etc.

Anyway, great story! Keep up up the good work.
Red_lantern #7
AWESOME STORRYYYYY LUVE IT
kuroainii
#8
Chapter 30: Thank you so much for your story. I don't know how to express my love for this story. Thank you also for making me laugh and cry at the same time lol. I really love the interactions and how they slowly realize their mistakes and love for each other. It was so sweet and lovely!!! ❤❤❤
devilishangel_15
#9
Chapter 30: I read this is in one go. I LOVED it :) I love the struggles they go through and how the come to realize that they love each other. Thank you so much for this wonderful piece. I was squealing the whole time and in some bits i laughed so hard and fangirles so hard and in some bits i got teary, because it was beautiful but painful too. You did a GREAT job on this :)
K-Joon
#10
Chapter 30: Umm I really don't know what to say...first I want to thank you for this beautiful story, I enjoyed it soooo much that you can't even imagine. Second I want to tell you that you have done great job, your fic was so awesome and fantastic. I love this kind of fics and I also ship JongKey so....you just made my day, because I read it all in one day.
My poor heart...It's like I want to beg for a sequel, but I don't think it's nesesery. I mean that this story is complete and have wonderful ending but still I would enjoy it much when the story will be some day continued. I know that there is nothing to write anymore but style of your writing and plot of this fic just simple amazed me. So even if I want you to continue this fic It will be not possible. But it's okay. Because their story freshly began. And we can only imagine like their life would look a like. I think it's great. I'm really amazed. Thank you so much one more time for this pleasure I was having reading this. Great job authornim. Hwaiting <3