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天国; Eden | Κατεστραμμένος ἄγγελος - Broken Angel
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Em1412 #1
ARGH OMG AJBLFJENJKLDFSJKLH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HEART BREAKING FOR SUHO *starts crying* Why does it have to be so sad!!!!
MaraudingSnitch1314 #2
Chapter 5: Author-ssi, that was really heartbreaking, but very well-written. Would you consider writing a happy alternate ending? :)
MaraudingSnitch1314 #3
Chapter 2: Wonderful first chapter, author-ssi. I'm looking forward to more. :)
LuckyJune #4
Chapter 4: I cried.. Seriously.. This had to be one of the amazing oneshots I have ever read.... It's soooo touching.. Suho, you're too soft. But I guess that's how angels are
CloudyJZA
#5
Nice story. I like all the angst~~~
There are two things I's like to point out though: in the title, you used a phrase in Greek. In Greek, all words have gender, like in French. The "Κατεστραμμένες" that you wrote is referring to only females. The correct one is "Κατεστραμμένος" since you are talking about a male angel.
Second point: in the description you're writing "Γωνίες-Angels"
"Γωνίες" means angles, not angels. I see both words very often confused the one with the other. If it's angels you want to say then it's " Άγγελοι "
sparklehippie #6
very well done! it made me wanna cry!!!!!
Yuri30
#7
ehe , suho <3 ^thumbs up 4 u author-nim^
BunnifiedTMGN
#8
This was so beautiful, an angel without wings in our society, an interesting plot! And I love the songs you gave, GDz That XX definitely matched you story!
b2stie #9
Beautifully amazing xD and love gdragons songs xD Anyways Ahh if suho would just man up and beat the daylights senses outta of her xD But it's ok xD they both are indeed broken angels :)
livealovesong
#10
Wow. You are amazing! I say you write a sequel :) hahaha And I think Kai should die...even if he is my bias ;)