HEY!

first of all, i would like you guys to know that this is my first time writing a fan fic, do please bear with any mistakes. comments are needed, so i can improve myself, too.

here is the prologue of the story:

Prologue:

“Seulgi-ah!!” called out Mrs. Bae. “Can you go to the grocery store and buy some things for me?”

Being the obedient daughter she was, Seulgi, ran downstairs, took the shopping list from her umma, and hopped into her car. It was really old and rusty, but it was sturdy, and Seulgi loved it. She wasn’t a very materialistic person and had never demanded anything in her life. She was content with it.

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“YAH!!! What the hell did you do with this?!?!?!” yelled Yunho at his maid.
“Mianhae, young master. It will n-n-never happen again,” she apologized.
“You’re damn right about that. NOW GET OUT OF MY HOUSE!!!”

The maid ran away in tears and Yunho looked at his ruined shirt. It was very expensive and he bought it when he was in the States. Now it was torn apart because of his maid’s carelessness.

Yunho stormed out of the house and took his Porsche out for a drive. He wanted to clear his head for a bit. “Stupid maid,” he thought.

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“ Aish, I hate traffic,” thought an impatient Seulgi. She popped in her iPod earphones and bopped her head to the music. She didn’t notice that the light turned green until she heard a scraping noise behind her. She got out of her car and saw that her license plate was hanging ajar and there was a dent at the back of her car. She looked at the freak that was responsible for it and he looked back at her from inside his car.

Seulgi furiously stormed up to the window and knocked on it. The driver came out of the car, which was a Porsche, and looked at her with a blank, apathetic face.

“Yah, what the hell is your problem?!?!” yelled Seulgi.
“Bwoh?,” said the driver. “It wasn’t my fault, you were the one who didn’t move when the light turned green!”
“You should’ve honked, stupid!” yelled Seulgi. She looked at the huge dent and groaned “Now, what am I gonna do? Car fixes cost a lot! Apologize NOW!”
The guy scoffed and took his wallet out. “How much do you need?” he asked Seulgi.
“Bwoh?? I don’t need your stinking money, I need an apology!”
The guy didn’t say anything. He just dropped some money on the ground before Seulgi, and went back inside his car.
“Y-yah!,” yelled Seulgi, banging on his window as he started the engine again. “Apologize!! YAH!!!”

The Porsche drove away at light speed and Seulgi could do nothing but stare after it.

“Aish, that ”

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so, what do you think so far? should i continue with chapter 1? comments are needed please!!