My Heart (One Shot)

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My heart . . a sweet moment between two lovers

*thought of a bath scene, then Jae Joong said he wants a bath kiss in an interview lol so I really wanted to write this fan fic more lol*

 

This one shot story, was inspired from a chaptered story I wrote.

My Heart's Joy 

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babanga #1
kakakilig!! :DD
dont know the term in english!! :DD
kpopartory
#2
Hello! @Thank you for the comment! I appreciate it!
This story just came to me, when I heard Jae say he wanted a kiss in a bathtub lol but I did not want it to be rated lol

I am smiling right now, thank you for your gift.
strawberryjae5
#3
This is seriously cuteeeeee ! I loved it ! I think I'll read the whole fic now :D
Good job honey~
kpopartory
#4
Hello! @|ChoasShiki! Thank you for the comment and thank you for reading the fan fic. "My Heart" is a like an additional chapter in the life of Jae Joong and 'HER', the characters in my fan fic "My Heart's Joy".<br />
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In "My Heart's Joy" they already have a 3 years old daughter named Yoshi or also known as Ko. In "My Heart", 'SHE' is pregnant with 'Ko'.
XjelleNathan
#5
<3....is it a girl or a boy???...the baby I mean...XP...just curious...XP..BTW NICE STORY!!!!!!!!!!
kpopartory
#6
Hello! @Crystalls! Thank you for commenting, *smile* I am not feeling good right now, and with your comment, it made my world a little brighter! Thank you!*smile*
Crystalls #7
bleh, just found out its completed LOL<br />
ahha if thats the case write more stories~ :D
Crystalls #8
aww, so cute!<br />
goob job at the poetry :) <br />
update soon! ;D
kpopartory
#9
Hello! @keeper! <br />
lol I think this is the most intimate I have ever written lol <br />
only my poems are rated in my fan fics lol and they don't have any in them lol<br />
Thanks @keeper for always reading my story, I really appreciate it!<br />
Your word of encouragement means a lot to me *smile* and a praise from you means a lot more *smile*
dream_keeper88
#10
lol! a bathtub scene! you just wanted a bathtub scene!<br />
hahahahahaha!!<br />
seriously, the way you portray jaejoong is really sweet, that makes you go, 'awwww' <br />
well, thumbs up on your goal. <br />
i haven't written an intimate scene, lol. that would be hard. and i won't dwell on that. hahaha!