Those Brown Orbs

Description

The first time Kim Gwiboon laid eyes on those pair of brown orbs was in freshman year. Every year the struggle to change her appearance was only for him. But no matter how much has changed, the pair of particular brown eyes she loved so much never got the attention she wanted.

She wasn't smart like him.

She could never live up to his level.

She was probably not even remotely close to his ideal type.

Maybe Junior year was the last time she tried.

Foreword

A/N Ok so this will be a long oneshot.

and this will be based on my sad life, sobs. 

I kept this story hidden for quite a while and decided to bring it back up ~

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InMemoryofJonghyun
#1
Chapter 1: You can really feel it was a personal experience. Beautifully written. I was really invested. I could have gone fir a kiss at the bed though.
charlottelehnsher #2
Chapter 1: This is cute and beautifully written!
kimfamily #3
Chapter 1: Wooow. Its been a year since i first read this. Still cried at the beautiful ending. Reminded me of my first crush. So beautifully written. Thank you again
kimfamily #4
Chapter 1: Just so you know i hate you for ending it there. But i love you and your story. Sigh. My heart broke for gwiboon. Its coz i know what it feels like to be invisible to someone you like. Ive read this story long ago before i made an account. Been looking for this since then. Aww the feelings i had when i first read this are still the same. You write so beautifully and the emotions are there. Marked this finally so i can read it anytime. Keep it up pls. The world needs more great authors like you.
himechama
#5
This is so sweet... I just leaned about this story just noe while searching for dome gwiboon fic... it's fluffy... I'm gonna cry
peggy17688 #6
Chapter 1: OMG. so so sweet...coincidentially was listening to Lee Hyori's U-Go-Girl while reading it. so apt. lol.
shawol81025
#7
Chapter 1: i LOVE this!!
Gwiboon (Key) is right, Jonghyun should be more obvious!
yveeze #8
Chapter 1: beautiful. just beautiful.
i love gwiboon stories XD
should have ended with a kiss ^^
RoseGoldxBTS
#9
Chapter 1: So freaking cute!!! I loved it!!
DarkMangaIza #10
Chapter 1: This fic is so good! You should really consider writing it from Jjong's pov, it would be awesome and I would read it in a hearbeat!