❛ FluffyPanda711

❝ E X O T I C G R O U N D S — the last batch (closed)
 
FluffyPanda711
 
 
reviewed by OnewLuhan
 
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title: 3/5
There is a 50/50 chance that I will click on this story.
 
f/d: 6/10
The font changes at the beginning from Arial to Times New Roman. The character chart is nice, but I feel that it gives too much away. Such as Chanyeol's little blurb, "Fake boyfriend"
 
appearance: 5/5
It is a pretty nice poster.
 
plot: 12/15
Good job, it is full of fluffy moments.^^
 
originality: 11/15
Sorry, but a high school life plus a bunch of guys liking one girl is not too original.
 
grammar & spelling: 12/20
I found a lot of spelling and grammar errors. You uppercase a lot of words that do not need to be uppercased. You only uppercase if it is after a period, if it is a pronoun, or if it is a title (i.e. Sea Cadet ___), or important place/country/state (i.e. Alaska, China, Statue of Liberty).
 
flow: 7/10
It is going at a pretty consistent flow.
 
characterization: 7/10
I feel like the characters are explained well.
 
overall enjoyment: 7/10
I actually really like cliché storylines. I think they are cute.
 
total: 70/100
 
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hanbining
#1
Congratulations on getting featured, author-nim!
prudencev
#2
Congratulations on getting featured! I've seen your shop around for a while. Love your work!
ShiksaGoddess
#3
Congrats on getting featured :)
jonginsworld
#4
congrats on being featured :--)
Chimx22
#5
Congrats! ♡
nightStar
#6
congrats :)
typewriter98
#7
congrats <3
finalist #8
Congrats! ^^
Lilbobaball
#9
Congratulationssss ^^