Tell Me You Love Me

Description

Seunghyun and Minhwan loves each other, but none make an effort to start the first move. Jaejin, being a 'nice' hyung, decides to help the both of them. Seunghyun/Minhwan, minor Jonghun/Hongki. Sadly, Jaejin remains alone. ):

-Very mild -

Foreword

I'm not sure how this story will turn out. ): Hopefully it's not too horrible and draggy, because I'm not used to writing fictions with so many characters (Well, all five members of FT Island is a lot to me. Usually I'll make all other characters disappear, leaving only the two main ones.) =.='

 

Anyway, I hope you'll give this story a chance. ^^ It took me a lot of courage to post this. D: 

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MissInspirit_
#1
aaaaaaaaaah that was so cuteee *_________*
PrimadonnaH
#2
omg that's such a good story !! i love it <br />
and the jongki parts ASDLJDSKJHJDF !!<br />
PLEASE WRITE MORE JONGKI CUZ ..GOD .. I LOVE THIS PAIRING !!<br />
ahm .. forgive me but i can't read the Seungjong fiction kekeke<br />
i'm a die hard shipper for jongki tehee<br />
=D
fluorescentsmiles #3
mm. no offense, sweetie, but i really didn't like the execution of this story. but the concept, albeit overused, is good. <br />
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i know this is a VERYY late comment, but yea.<br />
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as for the grammar, the usage is good-- for the most part. the only critique i have for this criteria is, if you're using two or more subjects, say the sentence out loud first. an example i would use for this would be: <br />
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"Jaejin rolled his eyes, 'Of course, only the both of you can be so clueless. It’s very obvious, you know, the stares that Hongki-hyung and Jonghun-hyung has been giving each other.'"<br />
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it should be "only the two of you could be so clueless... the stares that Hongki-hyung and Jonghun-hyung had been giving each other"<br />
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i'm sorry this may seem like a rude comment, but it's my two cents for this piece. (: but i sure do hope that you write more stories, and i am eagerly hoping that your future stories would be well. :]<br />
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- with love.
OnAFallingStar #4
AWWWWWW!!!!! that ending was....so.....cute! I love them together, so sweet >.<<br />
And ahahahahahaha Loving Jaejin in this fic, his self rantings made me lol. especially when he said that thing about being infected with "Hongki-hyung’s self-praise disease." AHAHAHAHA<br />
Loved it good job!
vagel_91
#5
Nice story, sweet and adorable.
AraHime
#6
waaa....it's already ended...<br />
What a sweet ending..hmmm..<br />
Please do more fanfics...
blingkey #7
AHHH!!! Finally! this is the first F.T Island fanfic i read! :D you did fawesome!! :D