First, Admit Defeat

Description

Thanks to Eunhee @ VER-SAH-TYLE for the adorable poster!

Kyuhyun, Yesung, Donghae, Eunhyuk and Kibum... five friends known in school for their hobby of destroying anything they can get their hands on.

One day Lee Sungmin, a quiet but hearty individual, shows up and is befriended by these hoodlum like boys that seldom try to interact with the the world outside of their own.

With complicated backgrounds, the five boys find a new perspective of life from the eyes of Lee Sungmin, who holds innocent thoughts behind those sly eyes. Yesung, who finds Sungmin vaguely familiar, knows everyone's histories and difficult situations but keeps his lips tightly zipped together, refusing to disclose any unnecessary information. Acting as the connection point for all of the boys, Yesung discovers that the relationship between Kyuhyun and Sungmin isn't as simple as it seems, and it only seems to grow more complicated as the days pass.

As tension grows more intense between Kyuhyun and Sungmin, the rest of the boys can only watch as they battle each other with words and actions. If any of the two were going to admit any of their feelings, the other would have to First, Admit Defeat.

Disclaimer: None of the celebrities used in this story belong to me; their names are merely borrowed. This story in no way reflects the artists in real life, everything is completely fictional and belongs solely to the author. No copyright infringement intended.

Foreword

Hm. It seems like my descriptions are always way too long. I need to work on that...


Again, I'm still very new to fanfiction writing. This is only my 2nd piece, without any criticisms from the first one cause I'm a coward and too afraid to post them! Hopefully this one is somewhat better than the first, anyways, and I hope everyone enjoys it!


Still in the process of writing it (almost finished!) It will probably also be around 18 chapters, each chapter not exceeding 1500 words!

Hope to see criticism and feedback! Thank you~


Yours Truly,

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HeeApprentice
#1
Chapter 18: There were parts in this story I didn't understood back then so I saved it and at least once a year I come back to read it. Finally, I understand everything now. I feel dumb for not taking the time to properly understand it haha
beepbeep_rp #2
that was cute
bangonew
#3
please update
lanternofhair #4
yore the bst!
i really like your story
Retroalien
#5
I <3 this story it was very well written
pluckfire #6
aww that was so cute :)
Jojokawaii #7
What was the accident with Sungmin and what made Kyu so angry about it? O.o I didn't understand that :0 <br />
But Otherwise a really kyute story;)
ScarletRosePetals
#8
Awww~ That was so sweet. I'm happy no one died in the end. Darn that cliche. Anyway~~~~~~ Yay <3
-dorkable
#9
No one seems to read because it's .<br />
You should try posting this in Livejournal.<br />
There are alot of communities suited for these kind of pairings.<br />
And yeah, if I may introduce myself, I'm Lala and I came from LJ too :))<br />
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So I'm reading this one because THIS is my OTP. :))