♬ †råñqµïl MêlöÐïê§ Rêvïêw §höþ ♪ [ßusy]

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Need an totally honest review for your fanfiction? Then you've come to the right place! :) 

Foreword

♬~ Wêl¢ömê †ö †råñqµïl MêlöÐïê§ Rêvïêw §höþ~

 

Ð梨låïmêr: We are here to give you our COMPLETELY HONEST reviews of your story. We will not sugar coat anything! You have been warned. 

ÇrêÐï†: Main image created by kyaagirly :)
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[4/29/12] ~ Our shop opens! :D

[5/12/12] ~ Remember to send some stories to kyaagirly for review! I'm not the only one here. ;)
 
[6/27/12] ~ Kyaagirly and I are both busy so we might not be able to do reviews as quickly, but please send them in anyway! We'll get to them ASAP.
 
[7/2/12] ~ Not accepting requests temporarily
 
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  1. Follow all rules written on here! If not, your submission to us will not be reviewed. D: 
  2. Please fill out ALL of the categories on the form [unless stated otherwise]. 
  3. PM to the form to either me (tiffusan) or kyaagirly. 
  4. Direct any questions to either me or kyaagirly via PM or comment box. 
  5. If you want to see when we'll review your story, check the pending list on chapter 1. 
  6. DO NOT RUSH US. We have lives too and we'll try to get to your stories as soon as possible. 
  7. We accept both completed and incomplete stories. 
  8. Don't forget to subscribe! 
  9. A thank you in the comment box will be greatly appreciated. :D 
  10. Sorry, but we don't review stories. :C 
  11. To ensure that you've read the above rules, the password is "musical note".
  12. just kidding. the real password is harmony

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  • Story Link: 
  • Reviewer?: (choose either tiffusan or kyaagirly) 
  • Password: 
  • Other?: (optional) 

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"Story Title" by "author's name"

Reviewer: (tiffusan or kyaagirly)

The Title (5 points):

The Plot (10 points):

The Context (10 points):

Character Development (10 points): 

Plot Development (15 points):

Overall: 

Total Amount of Points: ?/50

How We'll Grade: Next to each category, we will put a few sentences stating our opinion and the amount of points you receive.

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Best of luck to everyone! And please, don't be discouraged by our reviews. We are here to help you improve your writing, not to make you feel bad! :D 

Again, we are here only to give our honest opinion about YOUR fanfic. So it is your decision whether or not to accept our reviews. We completely understand. But please do not rage on us.

Comments

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finbatix
#1
thank you in advance for taking the time to review my story series^^
mizice90
#2
i have request for a review...
lynnryan
#3
Oh yay its done!
33.5/50 huh? Its much better than i thought.
Haha i know i'm not really a good writer and i get that alot.
Even from my language teacher.
But thanks for your honest review! I'm not sad at all, really.
I would love to improve more and i hope i can!
Anyways, thanks again!
Oh and you're welcome! I love loveee your exo shots! Do write more love! ;)
lynnryan
#4
I've requested for a review! ♥
GreenGardenPop
#5
Thanks for the review...
GreenGardenPop
#6
I requested
golferox
#7
Thanks for the review! I'm glad I didn't scare the living daylights out of you :P
KimPossible21 #8
Hi, thank you so much for the review :)
Yes, the character doesnt change much because she'a a young, healthy mother and I want her to be quite stable throughout the story, but she gets to realise and learn new things as the oneshot progresses xD

I wanted someone who hasnt read the original story to review it because I want to know a different perspective. XD
Thank you for doing this again.
Will credit when I get on my laptop.