The Devastating Nightmare!

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wil you survive when nothing seems like reallity anymore? can you survive the experiment?

Jasmine is a 16 year old girl. Her mother is very sick, she has a heart disease. The disease causes the heart to slowly stop beating.  Every year her hearts beats slower until someday it stops. one day she get's a heart attack wich causes her heartdicease to get worse, she is going to die unless she receives an expensive operation. But jasmine doesn’t have the money.

the scientific institue sets out an other experiment. just like the years before. the persons who are selected get a large amount off money. the scientific institute displays the experiment as simply putting the selected persons through some situations, but there are rumors. some say that people died in the experiment. or people who never came back. or people who went crazy.

jasmine signs up for the experiment, dispite the warnings of her friends. the moment you sign up for the experiment, the experiment begins begins, though you're not aware of it. the realisation comes when the next day you get a call that you are selected just like 107 other people. The scientist leaves all 108 selected people  in a huge house. In every room off the house is a different situation. In the situation you get a task. When you fulfill your task you can go further. But when you fail. You need to go some other way, or worse you can and up dead. Sometimes you can better refuse the task, and take a step back. Other times you end up dead anyway if your choice is to fight or to flee. You get a week to get out of the house, if you’re still in the house after one week you’ll be dead for sure.

Is your will strong enough to survive? Or will you be dead at the end of the first task? what if you best friend betrails you? and what if you fall in love with the one who is supposed to kill you? When the experiment begins there is no going back.

 

jasmine

  • caring
  • hardworking/determind
  • faith in others
  • she never gives up
  •  someone you can trust your life to because she will never betray you.

lee joon

after saving your life he becomes you best friend.

  • courages
  • cheerfull
  • he looks like an dangerous evil person at first sight but when you really get to know him he's pretty much an idiot
  • fait in oneself
  • honest

minhyun

you have no idea what is intentions are. one moment it looks like he can kill you. but other times it looks like he is going to sacrafice himself so you can life.

  • quiet/ doesn't talk much (in the beginning)
  • generous
  • sincere/ he hates it to lie to others that's why he mostly doesn't give an answer when asked something which he can't tell the truth.
  • responsible
  • considerate / thoughtful

these 3 people are the three main characters, but the rest off mblaq nu'est play a large roll. but i can't really explain there roll just read it.

also you can request any kpop group you want.  i can let them join.

( warning when i don't know the individul person's of the group very well the possiblity of the them being killed is high, so the reason for a lot of kpop idols being killed has nothing to do that i hate them.)

this means that a lot off groups will have some parts in the story.

 

 

Foreword

Team jasmine

Jasmine POV

I was lying down. I wasn’t able to open my eyes, and I couldn’t move. But I could hear everything around me. I heard something dripping to my right, but nothing more. it was silent. Then I heard footsteps. they were still far away but I could hear that they were coming closer to me every second. I didn’t who was coming for me and if he or she was coming for me. then I heard him speak, and I think it was meant for me, because no one answered nor was there any other evidence of an other person being close.

‘’hey! Pretty girl why are you lying there?’’ the voice called, ‘’ I see, you are trapped in there.’’

Trapped? What was he talking about. Was I trapped? I couldn’t see or move so it was possible. I wanted to know I was, and who was coming for me but I just couldn’t open my eyes. The voice of the man who had just called to me sounded so cold, mean and dangerous. The footsteps where still coming closer. I think he was now 5 meters away. My heart started pounding.

‘’ pretty girl, you are so vulnerable like that.’’  The voice called.

His words. What did they mean. Vulnerable. Was I in danger? I heard the man take another ste, two steps. He was so close, but jet so far away. At the next step there was a loud click. I heard a scream of fear and coming pain, a loud smack which sounded a bit wet. like something fell in puddle of water. then it was silent again. The footsteps had stopped. He was away. He was gone. Where did he go?

 

 

Team shinee

Minho’s POV

The five of us looked shocked at key. He was still holding the gun in his hands.

‘’ that wasn’t so hard wasn’t it?’’  he slowly looked up while turning his head to us and smiled.

That was the most creepiest smile I had ever seen. His face was covered in blood. Onew, at least I think he was called that. Couldn’t take it anymore. He screamed and hid himself behind some barrels. There he kneeled down. Wobbled a bit back and forth with his hands covering his ears. He was mumbling something. If I heart it right he was saying:

‘’ this is all a nightmare. This is all a nightmare. I will wake up soon. I will wake up soon.’’

He repeated it over and over again. I wanted that his words where true but I knew they weren’t. this was the terrifying real life. It was not a dream. Key whipped his mouth with the back of his hand. Which caused the blood that already was on his face to be smeared all over his right cheek.

 

 

Team nu’est

JR POV

We walked into the new room. It was a bright room with white walls. Even the ceiling was white. On the wall hung some weapons but a lot of places were empty, that probably meant that the weapons which hang there were taken. But the most terrifying of the room was that the floor was covered in red liquid. I think it was blood. Even on the walls  and ceiling where stains.

‘’ what happened here?’’ ren asked.

‘’ I don’t know.’’ Said Minhyun, ‘’ but I think I don’t really want to know.’’

Beakho limped to the wall with weapons and examined the weapons.

‘’ they’re really sharp.’’ He said, ‘’ those are the real thing, believe me.’’

Then a little piece off the wall opened like an door. No, it was a door. It was a hidden door. A girl around the same age me. Came slowly walking in. she looked pretty much unharmed except a  small cut on her cheek. She looked around and when she spotted us. She looked shocked. She tried to go back through the door where she came from, but without success. the doo  already closed the moment she walked in. there was no way out now. Then a voice called through the room.

‘’ welcome team nu’est and team jasmine. In the room as you can see are two doors. One with an big O. this door is only for the winning team. The other door with the big X is for the losing team. Unless of course the losing team isn’t alive anymore. Team jasmine and team nu’est figure the winner out and go through the right door.’’

‘’  does that mean we have to fight her?’’ ren asked

‘’ yeah, I think that is what they meant.’’ Beakho said and picked a huge sword and swung it around with ease.

I looked at the girl she looked so frightened. She pushed herself against the white wall. As if she could turn white and be invisible.

 

i am looking forward to write this story.

the idea for this story is already haunting in my head for three weeks now now it is time to start it. :D

eemsme
i am so sorry that i haven;t updated for so long, i had my first exam period and failed badly but i back now!! an updat in about 12 hours :D

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SooHaPark715
#1
Chapter 12: Language???
KpopForever171 #2
Chapter 7: No it isn't possible to kill yourself by holding your own breath unless someone is forcing it onto you.
It won't work because your brain forces you to take a breath.
jamyung #3
omg is she going to stab someone
update soon
SooHaPark715
#4
Dang! That's.. really.. intense stuff *breathe* Wow O.O *breathe*

Please keep updating ;DD
jamyung #5
feel so sorry for him
update soon
MrsPoliceMan #6
Update soon, Essie, I like it.
jamyung #7
must say a good song