A Day At The Beach-Kai

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Neh~my first fanfic... It's gonna fail so badly... PLEASE Subscribey or comment? *puppy pout*

Foreword

It was a bright Saturday morning, the rays of the sun crept through the curtains, you opened the curtains as you slowly inhaled the sweet fresh scent of the ocean. 

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minhosnoona #1
Chapter 1: cute!
MagicAngel #2
<3
baekyeolis #3
OH SWEET JESUS
Zzatul183EXOL #4
<3 <3 <3 <3 Kai
BreathlessndFearless #5
Aigooo, too cute (:
musicteddy #6
lol... vampno66 actually thinks something is cute... xD
forstbite #7
that was cute
princesshyo32 #8
aww that wasn't fail that was cute ♥

but i wanted just give u an advice can y make spaces between wprds ! i mean u put each sentense or time of speech on his line cuz its hard to read !!

but i like it and it was cute as oneshot ;))

keep it up


HWAITING
musicteddy #9
Told you it was a fail... T__T
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