Remembering the Promise [sequel of forgotten promise]

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It has been months since your last interaction with Ljoe and that last time who had a conversation it shattered you to death.But how will you react if suddenly Ljoe approached you again,not as just a classmate anymore,but as your byunghyuni oppa.Will it make you happy that he finally remebered his promise or hurt enough to push him away?

Foreword

“Byunghyu-ah you don’t remember ______-ah?!”my mom softly asked me

“aaa-niii” I whispered

“aigoo byunghyun she’s your bestfriend!remember poni-chan? The girl in the pictures with you when you were young .The one you always called everyday when you were 7 years old!”My mom told me

“_______ is poni-chan?!” I half-yelled

I was so shocked.Damn that explains why I felt a connection with her,that is why her smiles make me all fuzzy inside she is the girl I swear I will marry when we were young.

 

 

Anneyeong~

it's me again :)

This is the sequel of my first fan fic Forgotten Promise

Well if you haven't read it...Pls have the time to read it here

I hope you like it ♥

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fofolee #1
nice story.you are so good^^
htubtch #2
@Superjshineekpopkid- i'm sorry to make you cry :) But I am glad you liked it :D
Superjshineekpopkid #3
I cried :P It's very good though!!
htubtch #4
@LOVEPocky- Oh I see =))) Well I guess sorry about that.It's not that I don't know the meaning it's the spelling that is my problem ^^" I'll try my best not to commit mistakes again =))
Matocian #5
Byunghun it's spelled with only one "Y". I notice you add an extra why between "H" and "U" and you shouldn't be using words you don't know the meaning of by the way ^^; it can confuse people.
htubtch #6
@LOVEPocky- It's fine :)

Yes I know L.Joe real name is byunghyun if you are referring to this name "Byeongari" I just saw it in the net and decided to use it. And the I'm sorry about the Surname I mixed it up sorry :) About the mispelled korean words,sorry I am not a korean so... ^^

Anyways,thanks for telling me :)
Matocian #7
He finally remembered her~! Yay. LOL.

I have a few things noted I want to share. Please don't take it as me being snobby, rude or mean or anything like that ^^

L.Joe's real name is spelled "Byunghun" and his family name is "Lee" not "Kim".

The "A" goes before the "E" in dongsaeng.

After each punctuation mark make sure there's a space in between the punctuation and the next word. That way it's easier to read and correct grammar.

Before you end a quotation always remember to add a punctuation mark.

The letter after every punctuation should always be capitalized. "I" should always be capitalized as well.

I think you overused the word "bro" in the beginning. It could just be me who thinks that because I'm sure there are people who will always call their brother "bro".

Using only "the boy" and "brother" indicating of who's who was pretty confusing.
htubtch #8
@minjee20- It's nice that your byunghyunie oppa finally remebered you right? :D ^^

@Afrina_nadra-'m really glad you like it ^^
Afrina_nadra #9
^^ like it...at the same time it's very touching story :')
minjee20 #10
Kyaaa! The ending is so sweeeeeet!!!!
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