Yes...Ma'am

Description

Donghae always wanted to follow in the footsteps of his own father, who had gone and died in a war 6 years ago. His father was a general, with a hearty smile and an attitude that could light up this world. Now 26, Donghae decides that he is going to apply for the military and make his father proud. Through tough training and months of boot camp, Donghae finally becomes a soldier and there he meets his Commander. She was a girl with big bambi eyes and fair skin, far too beautiful to be in the army. So when he thinks she'll be all rainbows and sunshine he realizes not everything is what it seems to be, for in reality she has become his worst nightmare.

 

 

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Foreword

" Up...Down...Up...Down." The echoes of her clean voice echoed throughout the gym. Sweating men continued to push themselves up and slowly bend their elbows to a 90 degree angle continuously, It was almost as if that had become their everyday routine.

" Up...Aish! Donghae-ah arms up!" One man in the corner had finally collapsed from the excruciating pain and Commander Lee's eyebrows furrowed.

Donghae continued to lay on the ground motionless, ignoring her every complain. Her high Commander clenched her teeth and made everyone stop in up position, bolting towards the one man who had decided to stop early.

" Yah, Lee Donghae! You think your ready to fight? We haven't even been assigned yet and your already acting like a wuss!" She had planted one of her combat boots onto his face, her yelling was ringing in every mans' ears.

A man in the front cocked his head to his right and managed to yell loud enough for Donghae hear. " Yah, Donghae-ah! We're dying here, jebal (please)! Get your damn act together.".

Donghae groaned and pushed Lee's boot off his face, forcing himself to go into up position with all the other men. Commander Lee stomped back up to the front and faced all the sweating individuals.

" From now on, anyone who decides to skip out on training will be severely punished. Do I make myself clear?" There wasn't a man in the room who did not nod, including the slacker himself.

Lee crossed her arms over her chest and gave everyone a hard glare. " Recover, everyone up.".

Sounds of hard falling echoed off the floors as every man collapsed and spread their bodies across the cold ground, grabbing water bottles and chugging down as much as they could.

" I said everyone up!" Commander's voice boomed throughout the room and every one groaned, getting up on their feet and possibly wanting to throw up.

Lee kept a serious face and cleared . " Tomorrow I want you all here by 5:00 AM. I will make you do so many diamond push-ups until you can't breathe, you understand me?".

Not a single man said a word, causing her to smirk in delight. " Platoon, fall out.".

" Aye aye, ma'am!" Their deep voices were loud and clear as they all filed out.

The gym soon became empty and the only one left was Commander Lee. She sighed and held the bridge of her nose murmuring to herself, " Oh Soonkyu, what are you going to do?".

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MissLovergirl360
#1
Chapter 9: Hi... so this is my first, SUJU-related fan-fic that I have ever read. I've only been into EXO, but this fan-fiction caught my eye and I decided to read it. Sunny and Donghae happens to be my top bias in both SNSD and SUJU respectively. I hope you will update soon, fighting!! ^^
MissLovergirl360
#2
Chapter 3: OMG SUNGMIN VS DONGHAE. My top 2 biases in SUJU. ;_;
btw, I just got into SUJU so... hi!! :D
Va_asianloverz
#3
Chapter 8: please update soon
viaxoxo
#4
Chapter 8: Ah, I wonder what is Donghae's relation with Sunny's family...
girlsgenerationsnsd #5
Chapter 7: please update authornim ^^
Va_asianloverz
#6
Chapter 7: please update soon
AngelaMelly16 #7
Chapter 6: Please update soon
AngelaMelly16 #8
Chapter 3: Aww, my heart is hurt when i read sungmin say 'my firl', ugh, i imagine, if i be donghae, my heart is very hurt when hear it...
Va_asianloverz
#9
Chapter 6: please update soon
madesu #10
I love it!