KPossible21 - Moments I Don't Forget To Remember
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Moments I Don't Forget To Remember
Title; [5/5]
Description; [10/10]
Graphics: [9/10]
Character Organizing; [9/10]
Plot; [9/10]
Flow; [10/10]
Style; [5/5]
Originality; [10/10]
Captivation; [10/10]
Grammar and Spelling; [10/10]
Ending; [9/10] A little confusing; who was the father of the child? Although it’s a letter to the child, his background (parents and all) should be stated clearly enough for the reader to digest the whole story carefully.
Total; [96/100]
review by OnJong
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