Controlled.

My secret lover, would you stay with me?

Gd's POV:

'So you're just going to let her go?' Taeyang shouted at me, as he jumped up from the sofa.

I slapped my forehead, unwilling to listen to what Taeyang said.

'Hyung!' Taeyang shouted at me once again, as he pushed me up from the sofa.

'Aish mwoyah?!' I shouted at him.

'Hyung! You've been laying in the dorm for a week and look at you!' Taeyang pointed at my face.

'GOD! At least SHAVE!' 

I rubbed my chin and laughed.

'So what if I don't shave?' 

'Yah. Jiyeon hates guys who doesn't shave.' Taeyang warned me.

'So?' I replied coldly, lying back onto the sofa.

'She's not going to like me anyways. Why bother?' 

Honestly, after the incident in the car, where Jiyeon's reaction to my confession, I really had no idea what she is thinking anymore.

I honestly missed her.

Like hell.

I thought she loved me.

Why is she doing this to me?

'YA HYUNG!' Taeyang shook me out of my daydream.

'If you're thinking of her now, get your up and find her!' 

I laughed.

'She's not in town. How could I find her?'

Taeyang smirk at my reply.

'Get ready hyung. We need to set off now.'

 

 

 

Jinwoon's POV:

A sudden sunlight penetrate through my dark tent, and Seulong groaned.

'Turn off the lights!' He shouted.

I squinted my eyes open, and saw a small beautiful figure standing outside.

'YAH! Its 8 and you guys are still sleeping! Get up!!!' Jiyeon's voice stormed into my ears.

Jiyeon crawled into our tent, and started to pull Seulong's hair.

'ACKKKK!!! YAH YAH MY HAIR!' Seulong shriek, as he quickly sat up.

'IREONA!' Jiyeon shouted in his ears.

'AISH. You're an annoyance.' Seulong mumbled as he crawled out of the tent and went somewhere else.

I covered my jacket over my face, ignoring the fact that Jiyeon is still here, starring at me.

 

 

Jiyeon's POV:

'Panda ya... Wake up...' I poked his shoulders, as he turned away from me.

This idiot. I'm trying to be nice here... But...

'YAH PANDA!' I started to shake him.

'MMMMMMMMM!!!' He groaned.

'YAH WAKE UP!' I started to tickle him, making him wriggle like a worm.

'YAH GEUMANHAE!' He laughed, as he grabbed both my arms, and pulled me towards him.

I collapse onto him, and stared into his eyes.

He stopped his movement and looked at me gently.

Slowly, I could feel my cheeks blush.

Jinwoon slowly raise his head towards me, his lips slowly reaching to mine.

I closed my eyes, heart accelerating as I kept still.

5 seconds.... 10 seconds...15 seconds...

Hmm?? NO movement?

I opened my eyes, and see him closer to me, with his eyes starring at me.

'Aren't you going to get up? You're really really really heavy do you know that?'  Jinwoon whispered in my ear.

Feeling embarassed, I pushed myself up, trampling onto his body, making him cough.

'JUST WAKE UP YOU IDIOT.' I mumbled as I crawled out of the tent.

 

Walking around, I try to find Seulong, and found him lying in a tent, left open.

I blew my fringe up and ran towards him.

'YAH IM SEULONG!' I shouted his name, as his eyes shot open.

 

 

Seulong's POV:

'YAH IM SEULONG!' I heard my name, and suddenly shot my eyes open.

The next moment, I saw this tigress looking girl rushing up towards me, with her eyebrows furrowed.

'OH OH OH!!!' I shouted as I quickly stood up and ran away.

'YAH! GAJIMA!' Jiyeon shouted as she ran after me.

After 5 minutes of running away from her, my legs gave way and collapse on the grass.

Jiyeon, who was panting behind me, caught up and plopped herself next to me.

'YAH!... Why.. Why did you run?' Jiyeon panted.

'You're... huhhhuhh... You're catching me. How can I not run?' I shrieked.

Jiyeon laughed as she punched my stomach, making me cough.

I stood up, pulling Jiyeon up as she held onto my hands and walk.

'YAH let go..' I complained, but she clinged onto me.

'I'm too tired to walk!' SHe whined, as she stopped walking.

I sighed and ignored her.

'Well then stay there until you're not tired... oHHHH!!!' I shouted, almost collapsing.

Jiyeon rushed towards me, and jumped straight on my back, hugging onto my neck.

'Let's go OPPA!' She shouted as I try to shake her off.

'YAH LET GO!' I shouted, shaking left and right.

She giggled and choked me.

'NOT GOING TO !' 

I sighed as I clenched my fists together, and tugged my hands under her thighs.

 

As we walked back to the camp site, a horn sound was heard.

BEEP BEEP!!! BEEP!!!

I turned around, and saw a black car, slowly driving towards us.

'Oppa. Move to the side.' Jiyeon said as I walked to the side, continuing to walk back to the camp site.

As the car drove past us, it stopped in front of us.

 

'Mwoyah...' Jiyeon mumbled, as we saw two man, with great aura, stepping out of the car.

G-dragon and Taeyang??

G-dragon took off his hat, showing off his blonde hair, and twisted his neck. 

I put Jiyeon down immediately , and took a look at Jiyeon's facial expression.

 

 

 

Jiyeon's POV:

 

'OH JIYEON AH!' Taeyang shouted at me, and ran towards me.

I looked at them, with full of question marks.

'Why are you here?' 

Taeyang took a look at me and then at Seulong.

'oh! Can't he? He misses his girlfriend! That's why he came!' 

I took a look at Jiyoung oppa, leaning on the car, looking at me.

He suddenly stretched out his hands, and waved me over.

'Hyung's calling for you. You'd better go!' Taeyang smiled at me as he pushed my forward, leaving Seulong in confusion.

'Dude! I'll walk back with you to the camp site!' Taeyang said as he pushed Seulong forward, waving to me.

 

As they were out of sight, the whole path only left him and I.

I stood there, looking at him.

He crossed his arms as he opened the car door, signalling me to go over.

I walked quickly towards the car and sat down, slamming the car door by myself.

Jiyoung oppa rolled his eyes as he sat at the driver's seat.

'What do you want?' He looked at me.

I laughed.

'Shouldn't I be asking you that?' 

 

 

 

 

 

JInwoon's POV:

I walked out of the washroom with my face fresh.

Now where's the two?

The next moment, I could hear some shrieks and squeals.

'AHHHHH!!!!'

I walked towards the crowd, and saw that foolish hyung, laughing sheepishly as he stood beside a manly dude, with spikes on his shoulders, and his cap, 45 degrees on his head.

Taeyang??

I walked in between the crowd, and Taeyang smiled at me.

'What are you doing here? Where's Jiyeon??' I asked immediately.

Taeyang smirk.

'Oooh You're a little too late for that. She's with my hyung.' 

My heart felt really uncomfortable as I heard that Jiyeon was with G-dragon.

Something might happen.

'Where are they hyung?' I whispered to Seulong, who's currently enjoying the limelight.

'OH? Them? They're behind... Just a few meters away from the camp site...' 

 

 

 

Jiyeon's POV:

'OPPA!' I shouted at Jiyoung, whose grumbling and holding my hands tightly.

'OPPA LET GO!' 

'Tell me why?! aren't I good enough for you?!' He shouted at me.

'I told you I didn't fall in love with Yoona! Its all just a scheme!!'

'Well your scheme has work.' I replied, crying.

'Because of your scheme, or whatever act.' I sobbed.

'I finally knows how it feels like to be loved. And I know, you're not loving me. You're just controlling me. And I don't want that.' 

Jiyoung oppa slowly let go of my hands, and sat back.

I sighed and wiped off my tears.

'Oppa mianhe.' I said as I reached out for the car's door.

Before I could open, the door suddenly autolocked.

'OPPA! What are you doing? Open the door!' I shouted at him, flicking the door handle over and over again.

'I'm controlling you?? Well..' He said, leaning closer to me.

'I'll show you what it means then...' 

 

 

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quenzie11 #1
Chapter 55: Aww thank you for such a GREAT story, what a bootiful ending!! :DD
1year_already #2
Chapter 55: This is such a great story authornim :D
Love this story so much
Jinjja jinjja daebak !!!
ms_infinite
#3
Chapter 55: wow!!! daebak *Q*...this story is really nice. I finished this in 3 days and its really nice i would be really happy if you continue this story....pls continue it ms. rinniepark_1234 <3
itsourhiStory
#4
Chapter 55: Just discovered this one and this story is really daebak! It's so great I just had to read it all over again! Can you make a sequel of this? Pls! This is really great that I think a sequel of what will happen to them after Jiyeon came back and how their relationship will unfold now that they are both idols is a must
Maknaekid
#5
Hello im 13 yrs old.I'm kinda new here but i love jiyeon and jinwoon.If you are a gminor shipper,do check out my story.I will be working on it soon.It is my first fanfic so pls help give me ideas and confidence.Pls do check out my story.Thxs;p
RusselAnne25
#6
Chapter 55: Please Make a sequel, this story is daeebbakk!!!
fairytale_princess
#7
Chapter 55: ommo! Kyopta. Just finished read it. it was a cute story. Daebak! G Minooooooorrrrrrrrr!!! roaghh^^ ㅋㅋㅋㅋ
fairytale_princess
#8
Chapter 2: new reader here, kikiki. this story is interesting^^
roxannefanfics #9
Chapter 55: Hi readers! Chap 54 you r reading is actually the final. But I have no idea why it shrunk by one chap. Thank you for your support! And sorry for the confusion.
qwe123 #10
Chapter 55: it said there were 55 chapters? so hopefully it continues