Loser at Love

Description

Another story by ricephoenix__ I'm never satisfied with a story. Or think of any good ideas, but I think that this story's coming off great. Let's just hope I don't screw it up...

Olene Cyle and Ace Walsh have been going out for two years. So, for a very long time. One day, things get a little physical and Ace wants to break up. Olene is devastated when about two weeks later, Ace finds a new girlfriend. She's willing to get over Ace but it isn't happening anytime soon until one day at work she meets him. Talon Malley. Does she really love Talon or is she just using him? It turns out to be a more difficult web to untangle.

Foreword

ch. 01 - done and finished, Capiche?

"You look really tense today. Do you want a massage?" I asked him. He smiled a yes and returned to his lunch as I pressed my hands onto his shoulders, making sure that he was completely satisfied.
"I heard they've been going on for quite a while now," I heard a girl hiss to the other girl beside her.
"Really? How long?" the other girl asked.
"About two years. The longest lasting couple in the school. I wonder if anyone could beat their ongoing record." I smiled at the fact. I loved Ace Walsh. And I was certain that he felt the same way about me too.
"Thanks darls," he mumbled as he stretched his arms out. He gave me a little kiss on the cheek. I smiled sweetly at him.
"Now, go before you're late for class." I nodded obediently and returned to my group of friends.
"You guys look so casual! Some couples don't even do anything, and a massage? You're so kind to him Olene!" Xena squealed, following me from behind.
"Well, duh, no wonder they've been lasting for two whole years!" Beverly, the girl beside her responded, her attitude blazing as always. I grinned at my friends and grabbed my textbooks, rushing to class. It was too bad I didn't have this class with Ace or else, I would be able to spend everyday in school with him. Yes, every other class than Science, I had with Ace. It was a total dream come true. No wonder we were meant to be together.
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I was laying on my back on Ace's bed. Our usual afterschool hangout was at either's house.
"Eww, it smells like something died in here," I joked. Ace laughed and pointed to the large pile of smelly laundry on the ground.
"Soccer?" I guessed.
"What else?" He grinned that amazing smile at me and held me in his arms. He leaned in for a kiss and then things got a little physical. Before you knew it, I was ready to take off his pants. (He was already shirtless.)
"Olene... stop," he said breathlessly.
"Why?" I was stubborn as always. Then Ace did something I couldn't believe, he pushed me away. I was hurt, of course.
"Sorry." Ace looked pained as he said so. "It's just that-- well. Let me get this straight. I think you're just too physical for me."
'For me.' That's what ran through my head as I tried to digest what he was telling me.
"So you want to break up?" Obviously I wasn't serious but Ace was.
"I would like."

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Dailycommenter 98 streak #1
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