bruhh this was awesome

Chapter 1: my lil heart T-T why u do this to me huuuf~ it's just a fanfic which hyukkie was reading hahah I'm happy now :D i was crying

O.O

you got me there...

XD

i was already tearing up for Hyukkie.. XD
so Hyukkie was just reading a fanfiction huh.. XD

awww!! that was cute... kkk
i thought it was angst but it was really fluffy.... :))

This is cute!
But it's somewhat...lacking something.
It's not clear how the two of them got together, how Donghae found out that Eunhyuk liked him and/or what happened and how Donghae confessed. If you didn't want to write it, you could've implied it or something.