Clumsy Hearts

Description

When Jongin's world gets its head, he doesn't expect to find himself making friends with a kid who couldn't be any more different from him. But the longer he stays with Taemin, the harder he finds it to get away, and before long Jongin is falling into an entirely new world of friendship, feelings, love and heartbreak. Who knew his clumsy heart could feel so much for a pretty little country boy?

Foreword

Brief synopsis:

Jongin and his mother visit his grandparents one summer vacation, where Jongin meets a boy named Taemin. When he finds out he'll be staying in the country longer than anticipated, it gives him the chance to get closer to Taemin. Soon enough, they become inseparable - but then Jongin has to go back home. What will happen when life tears them apart, while fate entwines them together?

 

 

Title inspiration:

We were just 2 kids too young and dumb
Young, dumb and clumsy hearts
Hold them tight on that particularly sad day
You and I, you and I

Wishing you would hug me but I pushed you away
Saying the words “I love you” was
2 kids too young and dumb
We will have to live through the time, and be forgotten
You and I

 

 

Hello! This is my first time writing a story in a long time. Originally I was just sharing it with a friend of mine but now I've decided to post it. I was randomly inspired to write this story after seeing this clip, and it's taken me on a great journey so far.

Posting schedule is every 5-7 days, and I will take a break at the end of each part to get ahead on writing. So far most of the content has been G-rated, but I will flag chapters with mature content, giving warnings and notice as needed.

Get ready for a long ride, the slow journey of two kids and their clumsy hearts.

 

 

Word count so far:

Part 1 - 23.7K (chapters 2~3K each)

Part 2 - 59.5K (chapters 4~6K each)

Part 3 - 55K (chapters 3~5K each) [ongoing]

Part 4, 5 - coming soon...

 

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Hi all! I swear I haven't abandoned you 😭 I'm in the middle of moving and it's taking up all my time (and energy). I promise to come back as soon as I can, and sorry for keeping you waiting ♡

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Sharo001
686 streak #1
Chapter 33: Knowing Jonghyun, I don’t think his reaction was strong at all. He considers himself a guardian of sorts to Taemin, plus he saw firsthand the sad and pitiful state he was in when he showed up at his door. He also knows more than anyone else how Taemin has felt about Jongin for all those years.

It’s a bit harsh for me to say Jongin was trivializing their relationship but he needs to try to understand things from Taemin’s perspective and not be quite so selfish. Taemin’s fear is very real and rightfully so, given the fact that his brother has resorted to threats and violence. Where Jongin’s concerns are normal, their situation is nowhere near ordinary. Far from it.

Sorry to write a book, but this chapter was both frustrating and thought provoking. Happy New Year to you as well and have a good break. Take care and see you soon!
Djatasma
#2
Chapter 33: I'm glad Chanyeol caught Baeks hands but idk about the after.....
Jonghyun gave every bit of what Nini deserves. I get it, but he didn't consider Taemin at all. Just himself.
Sharo001
686 streak #3
Chapter 32: Chanyeol’s personality leaves a lot to be desired, he just doesn’t know when to stop. I honestly don’t see what Baekhyun sees in that big oaf.🙄 At least there weren’t any negative reactions to the kiss the boys shared. I’m also glad it was Kyungsoo who saw them in the bathroom and not anyone else. It’s actually good that Baekhyun was not there, I think he would have protested the shabby treatment of his friends.

I’m answer to your question though, I think it’s only a matter of time until their relationship goes public, especially with Jongin being well, Jongin. I’m just still worried about interference from Taemin’s family, but at this point I think he has already made his choice.
Djatasma
#4
Chapter 32: I promise. Just one punch for Chanyeol. I beg.
Sharo001
686 streak #5
Chapter 31: I like Taemin’s plans for them, and it was so cute that he even found a ring he liked. Looks like another trip will be in the works, maybe to the US.

This chapter was so sweet and I always love the boys interacting with Jongin’s mom. All the gifts were perfect and so appreciated. It was still a little bittersweet though, thinking about Taemin’s family. I’m just happy that he’s found a second family, and still hopeful that his will be supportive one day.
Djatasma
#6
Chapter 31: 🥰🥰🥰
Djatasma
#7
Chapter 30: I think Baek needs to punch Chanyeol in the face. Then go on a date with Jonghyun. Or a certain other member who had not appeared yet 😏. *Team Baekhyunwillbeloved*
Sharo001
686 streak #8
Chapter 30: Thank you for the Baekhyun update, and the Kyungsoo and Sehun cameos. I feel so sorry for him, especially since he’s been relegated to hook ups. I am keeping my fingers crossed that we will have another update at some point and find out that he’s met someone special - maybe Jonghyun?🤔 I think Chanyeol is being cruel to an extent, but short of completely severing ties with each other there is no easy way to resolve things. I was hoping against hope that Chanyeol might have just been in denial.
Sharo001
686 streak #9
Chapter 29: I must admit that I was a bit surprised that it was Jongin and not Taemin, who went to Baekhyun for advice this time. Speaking of Baekhyun, I hope we get an update about his relationship with Chanyeol at some point - even thought they aren’t technically secondary characters at this point.

I’m glad Jongin was able to speak up about his needs to Taemin. Part of being in a loving relationship is to be their for each other in the capacity that they need. They have indeed grown up.

Lastly, I was proud of my boys for taking on Taesun, but I realize it won’t be that easy. He will pop up again at some point, more’s the pity.😔
Sharo001
686 streak #10
Chapter 28: This chapter practically had me in tears along with Taem.🥹 I need a Jongin in my life.😁 Their time together has been so beautiful, I’m sorry to see it come to an end. I also wanted to hug the sadness away when Jongin had to switch his ring over to the right hand. You can’t blame Taemin for being a little paranoid though, Taesun has done a number on his psyche. I know he’s really scared to give others the wrong (right) idea.

They definitely need their own place and more privacy. It is the least Daddy Dearest could do for his abandoned child.🙄