Taemin

Once Upon a Dream
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TAEMIN

The ringing has stopped on its own and I’m relieved. I look up again but the old me isn’t there anymore. Maybe he ran away. I wouldn’t blame him. I get up too and squint my eyes to try and make out what’s around me.

But there’s just emptiness, until there isn’t. Now there are bright lights everywhere, and small tables, people sitting at them, and a fancy-looking bar. Those people look weird. They’re wearing bright clothes that don’t go together and have their faces painted with weird shapes.

But as I walk through the room, they’re looking at me like I’m the weird one. I check my hands and arms for anything abnormal, but everything is as I expect it to be—normal. A shiver goes down my spine when I see two people whispering things to each other while glancing at me. There must be something wrong with me.

I sit at the bar, but I feel very uncomfortable. I feel exposed. I look around, but there aren’t any exits to the room. I’m stuck here. I can feel my heart beating faster at this conclusion. I hate this dream.

I can see something reflective from across the bar and I shiver. A reflective liquid is approaching me, running over the surface of the bar, going back down on the ground, and I take a step back to create some distance between that thing and me. 

When all the liquid is on the ground, it suddenly jolts up, and strangely, I’m not so afraid anymore. The reflective liquid forms itself into a familiar shape, even though I can’t

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Beau1996 1333 streak #1
Chapter 12: The references were great - I enjoyed reading and thinking about the ending...
Beau1996 1333 streak #2
Chapter 2: One of my all time favorite Taemin videos!!
Beau1996 1333 streak #3
Chapter 1: Dreams freak me out at times too -
2Min_Nim2
#4
Chapter 12: OMG!!! Okay!!! But no, this can't be the end! This can only be the beginning of an adventure??? I need to know why they both had the same dream? Are they soul mates? Or is their subconscious trying to tell them something?
Please, I need more!!!!
2Min_Nim2
#5
Chapter 9: I find it super interesting that just as he's thinking about Minho again (his saviour I think) this liquid appears. As if it realised that Taemin might be able to escape from the dream after all (with Minho's help).
So it tries to pull him deeper into the dream, so violently that he stops thinking about Minho.
But why??? Why does he have to be trapped in this dream???
2Min_Nim2
#6
Chapter 8: I just love that you always have cover images per chapter. It makes it easier to imagine everything :)
I love how you describe how the dream is in this chapter. How no one picks up the phone, intentionally or not.
Or how he never sleeps but is always driving.
2Min_Nim2
#7
Chapter 7: WOW! Even after driving the car into a wall, he's still trapped in the dream???
The other Taemin?? OMG! And so there is a way out??? OMG!!!
2Min_Nim2
#8
Chapter 5: Oh wow, that's really cool. Does the rose symbolise reality? Because he could hurt himself on it? So Minho definitely has a chance to get him out of there.
I'm curious ♥
2Min_Nim2
#9
Chapter 3: I love that I have no idea what's going on and yet I'm so rooting for Taemin :D
2Min_Nim2
#10
Chapter 2: In this chapter I had to think about the Fake Reality trailer from SHINee! I think the Fake reality and Heartbreak concept fot so well togehter.
I love that you continued the PYN theme from the 1st chjapter into this one!