Chapter 3: Awwww this is so cute. Eunhae as kids is my ultimate favorite genre. Although Hyujae was a bit meanie to Donghae but I guess it's really his way of wanting to be close to Donghae.
Donghae who was scared of him always listened to Hyukjae and overtime grew close to Hyukjae. Adorable~
Chapter 2: I really love your writing for this story. How you described the ride on the bus is beautiful. It kind of gives mysterious feeling to it. I love how you chose pink and greem neon, eunhae colors~
Chapter 3: Ohw please this was adorable!
I loved how you portrayed kids behavior and how they grow affectionate to each other. It’s very sweet.
It makes me picture them being together and fond of each other forever. Maybe some ups and downs, some arguments along the way, but never really giving up on each other.
Chapter 2: I loved the line “Each person was like a ghost or a phantom; quiet, lingering and waiting to move on”.
It’s so powerful.
And I could picture so well the way those lights play on Hyukjae’s features.
The idea of them meeting again on the same bus it’s so cute!
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