[07] Bad habits

Santa Quaranta
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Haneul’s days are plagued by thoughts of what had happened at the party. She certainly wants to forget about that day, but her brain insists on replaying the scene of her falling in the stranger’s arms over and over again. How can she forget if all she does is think about it?

Kibum calls her out one day.

“I’m sure I’d spend my days thinking about falling into the arms of a handsome man, but you need to snap out of it and eat. I didn’t cook for you to leave it on your plate until it becomes cold,” he nags at her. He called her over for lunch after having cooked a variety of dishes. He was in a good mood that day.

“Kibum, I’m going crazy, aren’t I?” She asks her friend.

“If you continue this behavior, it will happen sooner rather than later.”

“I don’t know why I’m being like this. It’s not like me to think so much of someone I don’t know.”

“Would you be happier if I told you his name?”

Haneul rolls her eyes. “Happier, he says.”

“Well, happier. Have you seen your face lately? Anna rightfully asked me how we hang out this much when you look so disconnected all the time.”

“She was just being curious. Everybody knows she wants you all to herself so that you can gossip all the time. What kind of life is that?”

“The kind that knows who the dancer in the dark is,” Kibum says pointedly, giving her a challenging look.

“Oh, don’t give me that look,” Haneul explodes.

“What look? The do-you-want-to-know-look?” Kibum feigns innocence.

“Exactly. I don’t want to know.”

“He goes by the name of Kai.”

Haneul is silent for a moment. “You know you have a bad habit of giving more information than asked, right?”

“And you have a bad habit of only selectively listening to me, yet I put up with that and still call you my best friend. I guess we really can’t have it all, not even in this life,” Kibum exaggerates with a sigh.

That brings a slight smile to Haneul’s face. He has a point, but she won’t admit that out loud.

 

 

Kibum insists on going to a karaoke room. He claims he hasn’t sang in a long time and neither has Haneul. Truth be told, she didn’t want to go to a club, let alone the Mile High Club, as he had suggested some time ago. Even though there is a selected crowd that goes there, she doesn’t feel comfortable at all. She has to dress a certain way and put on heavy make-up; things she doesn’t quite like.

She enjoys going to the karaoke room, though. Just like Kibum, she had missed being able to sing and for the night, she simply lets go and has fun. They sing a variety of songs, from sappy, romantic ones to whatever Kibum is in the mood for. He’s actually a very good singer himself and sometimes he also performs at various clubs, but he says he enjoys it more when he sings together with Haneul.

It’s almost half an hour to midnight when Kibum decides that he’s sang enough. He has also had a bit too much to drink, so his feet are wobbly when they exit the karaoke room.

“Haneul, hold me. I’m drunk,” he states the obvious to his best friend.

“I would hold you if you’d slow down.”

Even though Kibum asks for her help, he simply marches forward at a speed that shouldn’t be allowed for a drunk person. Haneul can already feel a headache starting to form. It will be a long night for her.

She finally catches up with Kibum and tries holding him, not trusting his drunk self to continue any further than where he has come.

“Shin Haneul, you came. What took you so long? Am I running a marathon here or what?”

Haneul has no answer for that. “Another bad habit, you talk too much when drunk.”

“But you still love me, right?”

Haneul rolls her eyes. “And that is my bad habit.”

Kibum just laughs and

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sb1202 #1
Chapter 18: When I first started reading this fic, I was simply excited to read about your interpretation of virtual reality. In no way was I prepared for the emotional rollercoaster that you took me on. The pure mystery in the first half was enchanting, and the revelation of their true relationship heartwrenching. I was initially wary about character development because I usually read fics with rather long chapters, but the pacing and development felt very natural. I'm actually glad I waited until you completed this fic, because I would have gone crazy with anticipation between updates. Although I wish we could have seen more of Haneul's and Jongin's interpretations of happiness in Santa Quaranta in the epilogue, the ending serves as a more fitting closure.
I don't remember how your story found its way in my attention, but I'm so glad that it did. Thank you for Santa Quaranta, and I look forward to reading more from you!
JaeKnight
#2
Chapter 7: Okok let me collect my thoughts. Firstly, the way my heart fluttered when jongin hugged shen tian from behind. Then they kissed!!

And now this, aww they forgot about each other. And tables have turned, Jongin is now the hot stuff here. Now i wonder if they’re in a continuous loop in forgetting and not forgetting bc it seems like what Jongin felt in the first few chapters, where he felt a deeper attraction with Shen Tian the moment he saw her, is similiar to what Haneul is feeling rn.

Btw ive watched the San Junipero episode of BM and im keeping my guards up 👀
JaeKnight
#3
Chapter 5: Finally they met. Jongin sure is whipped for Shen Tian lol. Now my silly mind thinks do they know each other from the past?
I'm not sure if it has been said before but what happens after midnight?!?! It's all so mysterious
JaeKnight
#4
Chapter 4: Nooo I thought im gonna read their interactions in this chapter. you're good keeping us in our toes asjkdhas
but lol key telling jongin that he wont be able to find her. Yet jongin only has an evil grin inside
DeeDee101
#5
Chapter 1: Very nicely written prologue, you lured us into mystery to question who is that boy. I love description of setting, I actually visualized where she is. It's like I am dreaming instead of Haneul. Amazing! Good job!
JaeKnight
#6
Chapter 3: Finally a background of the title. I'm really digging the title, Santa Quaranta, makes you question what kind of place this is. And no kidding, Mile High Tower with 400+ floors? I admire your imagination! I loooooove lovee the setting, the city girl in me is so satisfied with the setup.

And OH GOD I’m loving it! I cannot wait for their interactions! Jongin is still a mystery at this point, we know more about the Shen Tian from Jongin’s perspective. And I’m reminded about the prologue, it’s in a woman’s POV, not Jongin’s. Jongin definitely remembers a blue-haired girl from his dreams. But how about Shen Tian? DO THEY RECOGNIZE EACH OTHER FROM EACH OTHER’S DREAMS?!?! OR the other came from a different dimension? :OOO very very intriguing

I also reanalyzed the films/series of which you were inspired from. I’ve watched Eternal Sunshine, but only heard things about Black Mirror, and TIO well—

SHOULD I PREPARE MY MIND? and maybe perhaps MY NON-EXISTENT HEART? I’m honestly—

sorry I talk too much but I hope people get to read this!
JaeKnight
#7
Chapter 2: WAIT could coffee be a key plot since you mentioned it a couple of times??? Now that I notice it, the chapter of the title is "The awakening". Doesn't coffee wake you up?
I skimmed back at the chapter, he didn't drink all coffees!! This is all too mysterious, or am i thinking too much?
JaeKnight
#8
Chapter 2: Oh no! I also have no time to react, so much is happening in his dreams! Did he almost drown? D: Was he hit by the car? Was the open door a dream or was it real? What's gonna happen next! Anyway I'm loving the eccentricity of the dreams <33 And loving the blue hair honestly <3

PS: as a coffee lover, i cannot emphasize how I melt every time you mention the smell of the coffee. It's as if I'm smelling it ughh
JaeKnight
#9
Chapter 1: + And I'd be lying if i say I'm not hoping for a chemistry that's similar to our main couple in TIO bc I AM (I need more of them), especially with the seemingly forbidden romance-esque in the description and now THIS prologue. but thats just me ><
JaeKnight
#10
Hello uhm,,, I was browsing under the tags and thought i saw a familiar name, clicked it, and I was SO SURprised seeing TIO as one of your inspirations for this story AAA Thank you ;; idk what to say (i'm still surprised D:). I'm keeping this in my subs list and read it in my leisure time. It looks interesting already as it gives you that cyberpunk vibes despite the the utopia tag, but it gives off that similar vibe at first glance with the tags and poster and description. And YOU HAVE NO IDEA I've been craving to create something cyberpunk aaa anyway quite looking forward to check this out hehe