[03] Yet another admirer

Santa Quaranta
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For three consecutive Fridays, Jongin goes back to the Mile High Club, in hopes that he’ll see the elusive Shen Tian again, but it’s all in vain. She doesn’t perform there and the atmosphere feels dull to him, even though the club is always full. He never stays long.

On the third Friday he visits the club, he is approached by no one else than the MC of the fateful night Shen Tian performed. He kept on emceeing the other shows as well.

“Looking for anyone here?” Key asks curiously.

Jongin is caught red-handed. His unfocused gaze, always moving, always searching, seems to have caught the attention of someone else.

“How did you know I was looking for someone?” Jongin returns the question.

“It’s totally not obvious by the way you were scanning this entire room just now,” Key bites with sass but it’s not malicious at all. “Is it a girl we’re looking for? I know everyone who goes here.”

“I was actually looking for Shen Tian,” Jongin says boldly, changing tactic. Since Key offered, he might as well take it and see what he can find out. There is nothing to lose.

“Shen Tian, huh? Yet another admirer! And here I was, thinking you were looking for simpler things in life,” Key rolls his eyes and scoffs.

His words pique Jongin’s interest. “Simpler things how? What do you mean by that?”

“Well, I’m guessing you must be new to this city, hence the confusion. Shen Tian is not someone you look for around here. She leads a very private life. Believe me when I say this,” Key states matter-of-factly. “You can’t find her even if you search for her for days and nights on end. So it's best if you forget the girl.”

“But she lives in this city?”

“Well, of course she does. But you still won’t find her,” Key replies stubbornly to Jongin’s continuous questions.

“Have other people looked for Shen Tian before?”

“I hate to break it to you, honey, but she has a lot of admirers,” Key’s sass knows no end. “Men and women alike. Let’s admit it, she’s that gorgeous. Some people have even approached me, looking for more information like yourself, but they’ve given up after a while. You can’t chase someone who doesn’t want to be found, now can you?”

The question he poses is rhetorical. Of course, a decent human wouldn’t do that. He won’t do that, if that’s what Shen Tian wants. But he thinks he deserves to meet her again. The looks they exchanged that night said something else. It didn’t look as if Shen Tian didn’t want to be found by him, if he ever searched for her.

Before Jongin leaves the club, he throws one last question, just to test a wild theory. “What color is Shen Tian’s hair?”

Key looks at him as if he’s grown a second head, but Jongin knows what he’s doing.

“My boy, do you have trouble seeing or is this a trick question? Of course it’s red!” Key says, entirely convinced that the boy in front of him is crazy.

Jongin’s smile starts small until it turns to a bigger one. Key keeps looking at him like he’s out of his mind.

“Thanks for your help, man. You did more than you can imagine,” Jongin tells the MC, who’s still dumbfounded by the scene that just unfolded.

Everything makes sense now. Why Shen Tian appears to be untraceable. It’s because she hides under a mask. But Jongin promises he’ll find her, even if it turns out to be difficult.

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sb1202 #1
Chapter 18: When I first started reading this fic, I was simply excited to read about your interpretation of virtual reality. In no way was I prepared for the emotional rollercoaster that you took me on. The pure mystery in the first half was enchanting, and the revelation of their true relationship heartwrenching. I was initially wary about character development because I usually read fics with rather long chapters, but the pacing and development felt very natural. I'm actually glad I waited until you completed this fic, because I would have gone crazy with anticipation between updates. Although I wish we could have seen more of Haneul's and Jongin's interpretations of happiness in Santa Quaranta in the epilogue, the ending serves as a more fitting closure.
I don't remember how your story found its way in my attention, but I'm so glad that it did. Thank you for Santa Quaranta, and I look forward to reading more from you!
JaeKnight
#2
Chapter 7: Okok let me collect my thoughts. Firstly, the way my heart fluttered when jongin hugged shen tian from behind. Then they kissed!!

And now this, aww they forgot about each other. And tables have turned, Jongin is now the hot stuff here. Now i wonder if they’re in a continuous loop in forgetting and not forgetting bc it seems like what Jongin felt in the first few chapters, where he felt a deeper attraction with Shen Tian the moment he saw her, is similiar to what Haneul is feeling rn.

Btw ive watched the San Junipero episode of BM and im keeping my guards up 👀
JaeKnight
#3
Chapter 5: Finally they met. Jongin sure is whipped for Shen Tian lol. Now my silly mind thinks do they know each other from the past?
I'm not sure if it has been said before but what happens after midnight?!?! It's all so mysterious
JaeKnight
#4
Chapter 4: Nooo I thought im gonna read their interactions in this chapter. you're good keeping us in our toes asjkdhas
but lol key telling jongin that he wont be able to find her. Yet jongin only has an evil grin inside
DeeDee101
#5
Chapter 1: Very nicely written prologue, you lured us into mystery to question who is that boy. I love description of setting, I actually visualized where she is. It's like I am dreaming instead of Haneul. Amazing! Good job!
JaeKnight
#6
Chapter 3: Finally a background of the title. I'm really digging the title, Santa Quaranta, makes you question what kind of place this is. And no kidding, Mile High Tower with 400+ floors? I admire your imagination! I loooooove lovee the setting, the city girl in me is so satisfied with the setup.

And OH GOD I’m loving it! I cannot wait for their interactions! Jongin is still a mystery at this point, we know more about the Shen Tian from Jongin’s perspective. And I’m reminded about the prologue, it’s in a woman’s POV, not Jongin’s. Jongin definitely remembers a blue-haired girl from his dreams. But how about Shen Tian? DO THEY RECOGNIZE EACH OTHER FROM EACH OTHER’S DREAMS?!?! OR the other came from a different dimension? :OOO very very intriguing

I also reanalyzed the films/series of which you were inspired from. I’ve watched Eternal Sunshine, but only heard things about Black Mirror, and TIO well—

SHOULD I PREPARE MY MIND? and maybe perhaps MY NON-EXISTENT HEART? I’m honestly—

sorry I talk too much but I hope people get to read this!
JaeKnight
#7
Chapter 2: WAIT could coffee be a key plot since you mentioned it a couple of times??? Now that I notice it, the chapter of the title is "The awakening". Doesn't coffee wake you up?
I skimmed back at the chapter, he didn't drink all coffees!! This is all too mysterious, or am i thinking too much?
JaeKnight
#8
Chapter 2: Oh no! I also have no time to react, so much is happening in his dreams! Did he almost drown? D: Was he hit by the car? Was the open door a dream or was it real? What's gonna happen next! Anyway I'm loving the eccentricity of the dreams <33 And loving the blue hair honestly <3

PS: as a coffee lover, i cannot emphasize how I melt every time you mention the smell of the coffee. It's as if I'm smelling it ughh
JaeKnight
#9
Chapter 1: + And I'd be lying if i say I'm not hoping for a chemistry that's similar to our main couple in TIO bc I AM (I need more of them), especially with the seemingly forbidden romance-esque in the description and now THIS prologue. but thats just me ><
JaeKnight
#10
Hello uhm,,, I was browsing under the tags and thought i saw a familiar name, clicked it, and I was SO SURprised seeing TIO as one of your inspirations for this story AAA Thank you ;; idk what to say (i'm still surprised D:). I'm keeping this in my subs list and read it in my leisure time. It looks interesting already as it gives you that cyberpunk vibes despite the the utopia tag, but it gives off that similar vibe at first glance with the tags and poster and description. And YOU HAVE NO IDEA I've been craving to create something cyberpunk aaa anyway quite looking forward to check this out hehe