[02] Blinding lights

Santa Quaranta
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MMXXIV / XXVII

The Mile High Tower is renowned as the place to go if you’re in the city of Santa Quaranta. Or so Jongin had heard. It’s Friday evening and his curious feet seem to be taking him to said place. When he came to town, he heard of an extremely tall building located right in the center, serving as one of the main attractions with its intricate structure and intimidating height. With no less than 484 floors, the tower is truly deserving of its name. Rumor had it that its architect had once dreamed of constructing the tallest building ever.

The city is buzzing. At 22:08 in the evening, Jongin feels more alive than ever. People crossing roads, cars honking, restaurants swarming with customers, clubs blasting music… It’s easy to get lost in all that noise. Jongin had never been fascinated by such settings, but he finds himself feeling in awe at everything he sees. The city is chaotic, but there is also a sense of order in that chaos.

According to the map on his phone, he’s close to the city center and Jongin can feel it before he sees it. The Mile High Tower raises just in front of his eyes and he tries to spot where its end is, but to no avail. The night, although clear, hides the higher floors of the building, shrouding it in mystery. He almost feels intimidated, but at the same time, he marvels at what the human brain is capable of doing.

Someone bumps into him in the midst of the fascination, breaking Jongin out from his reverie.

A boy no older than 15, hands him a flyer before speaking to him.

“The famous Shen Tian sings tonight at the Mile High Club. You can’t miss her performance!”

Jongin doesn’t know who this Shen Tian is, but she must be quite the hype since there are people spreading flyers with her name. Having thought of no better entertainment for the night, he decides he’ll scale the Mile High Tower, for two reasons: out of curiosity and to catch said singer’s performance.

The Mile High Club is located on the last floor of the tower. It takes a seven minute elevator ride for Jongin to reach it and he’s surprised he doesn’t feel nauseated, given how fast the elevator operated. The setting of the club takes Jongin back in time, in contrast to the rest of the tower. The interior is similar to a 70’s jazz club he remembers having visited in New York that one time he went. Round tables with wooden chairs circle the main stage, which accommodates a small sized orchestra. Red curtains separate the stage from the backstage, while the bar sits on the left side of it. The overall colors that dominate are brown and red and Jongin finds the combination and aesthetic perfect.

The place is packed, so Jongin feels lucky when he finds an empty table directly in front of the stage. It seems everybody is in good company, as chatter and laughter surround him from all directions. He thinks he’s the only one who’s unaccompanied, but that doesn’t bother him. The bourbon he ordered is good enough company until the show starts.

At 22:45, the MC takes to the stage.

“Ladies and gentlemen, welcome to yet another amazing night at the Mile High Club,” he says and the crowd applauds him. “My name is Key and I am your host tonight. But don’t let me keep you away from the real star of the show. You’ve been requesting for her to come back. We heard you,” someone in the crowd whistles. “We heard you and we brought her in tonight,” he speaks in a typically euphoric tone like MCs do. “Ladies and gentlemen, without further ado, please welcome on stage, the one and only, Shen Tian.”

The crowd erupts into a loud applause. Jongin joins them, compelled. From the looks of it, the singer is quite famous among club goers.

The lights dim and the crowd goes silent, before the sound of music spreads in all corners of the club. It’s as if two fast cars are zooming past each-other in a tight race while thunderbolts strike in the sky. At that exact moment a blinding light shines on stage, fading as fast as it hit. The opening drumbeat sounds familiar to Jongin and he’s sure he’s heard the song one too many

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sb1202 #1
Chapter 18: When I first started reading this fic, I was simply excited to read about your interpretation of virtual reality. In no way was I prepared for the emotional rollercoaster that you took me on. The pure mystery in the first half was enchanting, and the revelation of their true relationship heartwrenching. I was initially wary about character development because I usually read fics with rather long chapters, but the pacing and development felt very natural. I'm actually glad I waited until you completed this fic, because I would have gone crazy with anticipation between updates. Although I wish we could have seen more of Haneul's and Jongin's interpretations of happiness in Santa Quaranta in the epilogue, the ending serves as a more fitting closure.
I don't remember how your story found its way in my attention, but I'm so glad that it did. Thank you for Santa Quaranta, and I look forward to reading more from you!
JaeKnight
#2
Chapter 7: Okok let me collect my thoughts. Firstly, the way my heart fluttered when jongin hugged shen tian from behind. Then they kissed!!

And now this, aww they forgot about each other. And tables have turned, Jongin is now the hot stuff here. Now i wonder if they’re in a continuous loop in forgetting and not forgetting bc it seems like what Jongin felt in the first few chapters, where he felt a deeper attraction with Shen Tian the moment he saw her, is similiar to what Haneul is feeling rn.

Btw ive watched the San Junipero episode of BM and im keeping my guards up 👀
JaeKnight
#3
Chapter 5: Finally they met. Jongin sure is whipped for Shen Tian lol. Now my silly mind thinks do they know each other from the past?
I'm not sure if it has been said before but what happens after midnight?!?! It's all so mysterious
JaeKnight
#4
Chapter 4: Nooo I thought im gonna read their interactions in this chapter. you're good keeping us in our toes asjkdhas
but lol key telling jongin that he wont be able to find her. Yet jongin only has an evil grin inside
DeeDee101
#5
Chapter 1: Very nicely written prologue, you lured us into mystery to question who is that boy. I love description of setting, I actually visualized where she is. It's like I am dreaming instead of Haneul. Amazing! Good job!
JaeKnight
#6
Chapter 3: Finally a background of the title. I'm really digging the title, Santa Quaranta, makes you question what kind of place this is. And no kidding, Mile High Tower with 400+ floors? I admire your imagination! I loooooove lovee the setting, the city girl in me is so satisfied with the setup.

And OH GOD I’m loving it! I cannot wait for their interactions! Jongin is still a mystery at this point, we know more about the Shen Tian from Jongin’s perspective. And I’m reminded about the prologue, it’s in a woman’s POV, not Jongin’s. Jongin definitely remembers a blue-haired girl from his dreams. But how about Shen Tian? DO THEY RECOGNIZE EACH OTHER FROM EACH OTHER’S DREAMS?!?! OR the other came from a different dimension? :OOO very very intriguing

I also reanalyzed the films/series of which you were inspired from. I’ve watched Eternal Sunshine, but only heard things about Black Mirror, and TIO well—

SHOULD I PREPARE MY MIND? and maybe perhaps MY NON-EXISTENT HEART? I’m honestly—

sorry I talk too much but I hope people get to read this!
JaeKnight
#7
Chapter 2: WAIT could coffee be a key plot since you mentioned it a couple of times??? Now that I notice it, the chapter of the title is "The awakening". Doesn't coffee wake you up?
I skimmed back at the chapter, he didn't drink all coffees!! This is all too mysterious, or am i thinking too much?
JaeKnight
#8
Chapter 2: Oh no! I also have no time to react, so much is happening in his dreams! Did he almost drown? D: Was he hit by the car? Was the open door a dream or was it real? What's gonna happen next! Anyway I'm loving the eccentricity of the dreams <33 And loving the blue hair honestly <3

PS: as a coffee lover, i cannot emphasize how I melt every time you mention the smell of the coffee. It's as if I'm smelling it ughh
JaeKnight
#9
Chapter 1: + And I'd be lying if i say I'm not hoping for a chemistry that's similar to our main couple in TIO bc I AM (I need more of them), especially with the seemingly forbidden romance-esque in the description and now THIS prologue. but thats just me ><
JaeKnight
#10
Hello uhm,,, I was browsing under the tags and thought i saw a familiar name, clicked it, and I was SO SURprised seeing TIO as one of your inspirations for this story AAA Thank you ;; idk what to say (i'm still surprised D:). I'm keeping this in my subs list and read it in my leisure time. It looks interesting already as it gives you that cyberpunk vibes despite the the utopia tag, but it gives off that similar vibe at first glance with the tags and poster and description. And YOU HAVE NO IDEA I've been craving to create something cyberpunk aaa anyway quite looking forward to check this out hehe