daydream fever

Description

two people in a burning city. there's no past nor a future between them. only an ending all empty like the landscape that beholds them.

Foreword

inspired by the opening monologue of "dead flag blues" by godspeed you! black emperor. it's an absurdly long song.Β 

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SkyeButterfly
#1
Chapter 1: Wow I’m so impressed by all the details and you describe the atmosphere and setting of the story. It’s very poetic in a way. This is haunting and beautiful. Thank you for writing and sharing this πŸ₯ΊπŸ’•
SkyeButterfly
#2
Wow the description is so interesting πŸ‘€
buriedphoenix
#3
God, this is beautiful. Truly. The whole ambiguous open and end, it's gosh darn amazing. I love the way you described their surroundings and Moonbyul's feelings and with just a few words you evoke such an atmosphere, it's haunting. Thanks for writing this!
buriedphoenix
#4
just seeing godspeed you! black emperor makes me want to read the story, and the song ain't as absurdly long as others from them :D I come back to this during my seminars!
moonstars_simp #5
this is sad but nice work :)