Chapter 1: This is so sweet and sad at the same time. Sweet is the love they have. Sad is the ending. While I would love for both of them to get to safety and be protected from whatever they are running from, the situation doesn’t look too good. At least we have a hope that Eunbi will make it to safety.
While I enjoyed the story it felt too short. I wouldn’t mind reading a longer version of this, you don’t have to write it, that’s just a thought. Some things felt unexplained like how did they get in such situation, who are they running from, how did their relationship start. But nevertheless I enjoyed reading the story. The story is good and I like the way it’s written.
Thank you for writing this ^^
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