The Sunset

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Description

Tzuyu came to a secret lagoon where she found untold secrets of a magical girl 

Foreword

As sudden as the rain was falling, the sky cleared up, and Tzuyu watched as the sun peeked beneath the cloud, the light descended along with it, coloring the sky and the sea with gold and orange. The fear which previously settled began to disappear as she watched the view in front of her, and she didn’t realize that she was holding her breath when she noticed that there was something different in the leaves and the sand. They were glowing — pink and lavender. Tzuyu had never seen something as magical. 

 

Thinking that her eyes were playing tricks on her, she came down and touched the wet sand, feeling it with her palm. 

 

“Hello?” someone called, and Tzuyu dragged her eyes from the floor to find the owner of the voice. First she saw their feet, then Tzuyu’s eyes climbed still to the fabric of their clothings; white, red, and gold. Then she finally met the owner of the voice. 

HornedDevil
Finished that, my first non rated story with this username lmao. Hope you guys like it. Idk what I’m writing tbh, please let me know what your thoughts about it.

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Eizen1225 #1
I regret not reading this soon-- I was thinking about the number of words when I saw this but weeks later when i felt less hectic with my schedule I felt the need to read this. And I was so wrong with doubting this- this was like the best read of satzu I've had in a while... And I am glad I trusted myself to read this first (as recommended) before the purple mark story. Thank you for writing this (for real ), and I am glad this was long because if not I dont think it would make me feel more attached to the characters (well also of course I dont want to end reading such good fanfic). ♡ so excited to read their next lives TT
maknae-mess
#2
Chapter 1: This was so amazing. The progression of their friendship to the development of their feelings over time. I'm really glad that Tzuyu got to live her life even if she wanted to spend it with Sana bc I know it'd be harder to be together and that's something Sana understood more. Ugh loved their characterizations with each other and how well they match and the mysticism and fantasy you've woven for them. Truly thank you for writing!
twiceficlover #3
Chapter 1: The comments are interesting, I need to prepare myself for this huh
FlowerpowerSone9 #4
Chapter 1: This is so wonderful T.T when I saw it was 16l word count I was so happy! Idk why or how do you always write awesome fanfics!? But please keep them coming!
RedSapph
#5
Chapter 1: When I read the first part, I thought, "is this some kind of hotarubi no mori e?" Then wow I didn't expect that. It's a sad thought that Tzu's gonna die while Sana's about to have her freedom :(( Waiting for the bonus chap (。•̀ᴗ-)
leeshymix
#6
Chapter 1: Author-niiiiim this was such a fresh take on SaTzu 😭 i never missed the irl details of these amazing girls you included, but at the same time, i got lost in this alternative reality. I teared up, really—one thing I never expected in reading one of your fics. And just wow, this is beyond beautiful. So much angst, indeed. And it just genuinely hurts to think about the soulmate-concept and how life is just so unfair for many people. AAAAAA this really hurt, but it's definitely beautiful. I normally don't reread angst but this is an exception I'll visit once again real soon. Thank you for sharing your craft, author-nim! I wish you all the creative juices and motivation to continue writing quality fics, along w your constant happiness and healthy well-being <333
leeshymix
#7
Authorniiiiiiiim about to read this w a soju-hazed mind n I can't wait!! Let's go :>
lonelynovember
#8
Chapter 1: I was finally able to read this! And it was totally worth it. My head has been obsessed with multiple universes and time traveling for a while now and reading this was so much fun! It literally made me smile and I almost cried at how vulnerable the characters were. I'm glad you decided to do something like this, it was perfect! I'll always keep waiting for your next works! Take care, hugs.
redisthenewgreen #9
Chapter 1: Such an amazing story!!! You honestly deserve all the praises in the world. I already felt that the story would be angsty but I still finished it wanting to know the reason for Sana's curse. I cried so hard when Sana didn't show herself to Tzuyu for such a long time 😩😩😩

Thank you so much for creating such a beautiful story. Can't wait for your bonus chapter!!
kennjoy02 #10
Chapter 1: Yes please the bonus this is so amazing 😍