To Build a Home

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Hirai Momo, a 28-year-old telemarketer living her uneventful days inside her earthquake-proof cubicle phones her 22nd prospect of the day - a half-drunk woman who told her she likes her voice.

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Or Momo simps hard for Nayeon.

(Artwork by me)

Foreword

Foreword from myself because who else.

 

I actually started this way back in November last year and unlike Take Me Back, I didn't follow a weekly release schedule and just wrote bits and pieces whenever I felt like it. And now it's April...so...yeah...

But finally, my tribute to my ult ship is finished!

Would appreciate your comments as always and an upvote would be very kind if you enjoyed the story!
Thank you very much and I hope ya'll enjoy!

PS: My Italian vocabulary and grammar are nonexistent so if anyone can maybe proofread(because I don't know anyone who can), I'd really appreciate it if you point out my mistakes.
 

Some songs that helped me write this:

  • To Build a Home - The Cinematic Orchestra
  • Please, Please, Please, Let Me Get What I Want - The Smiths
  • Like Real People Do - Hozier
  • From Me, the Moon - Lav
  • Engagement Party - Justin Hurwitz
  • (Spring) This Was Your Place - Sunlight Ascending
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Alexav94 #1
Chapter 7: First of all, congratulations on your art work, I loved it. And your talent seems to be diverse, author. Your writing is incredible and I was captivated from the beginning. It took me a whole day to finish reading it, but even now, at dawn, it has been worth every minute.

I'm new to the NaMo ship, but your story will definitely become one of my favorites forever. Thank you for your time and effort to write this. I wish you the best, author. And with much affection and respect I send you a big hug.

👏❤️
onceinaheart9 #2
Chapter 7: Finished reading this fic with tears rolling down my face, the storyline, the characters and the emotions you built are amazing and made me engaged throughout this whole story. I felt what the characters felt, no matter it is Momo, or Nayeon, or even Mina and Sana. I felt the same with Momo, who was torn between quitting the telemarketer job which she didn't hate, but didn't like either to pursue the one she likes, which kinda screams my situation right now. For Nayeon, it's hard to not fall in love with her although I'm not Momo (even drunk Sana likes her!). I felt her torn between her work and Momo, and despite of my lack of knowledge in architecture, I still managed to feel Nayeon's emotion when she's talking about architecture. Although I love both of them, I've came to a conclusion that I love Mina's character the most throughout this fic, she's always understanding and caring for namo in her own ways (although in some point, I think she likes Momo more lol). I love every bit of this story and there are some moments which I love very much, but I especially love the moment when Nayeon met Momo again and the dialogues between them in the last chapter. This fic totally worth a read and several rereads if anyone ask me, looking forward to your another story! <3
tiramisu_7 #3
Chapter 7: This is probably my favorite read. Thank you for writing this.
Mabongs #4
Chapter 7: its such a good story! i wish more of people would recognize this. thank you for your hard work ㅠㅠ the roller coaster emotions tho. hope you'll keep writing
Xiunisee #5
Chapter 7: What a beautiful piece, looking forward to your future namo fics!
Kim_Giyu #6
daebak ._.
GloriaAngline #7
I finished reading it last night I saw this one at AO3... So far I loved this and planning to reread it again...kudos author nim... It was a great stories... I'm excited for the other stories from you...
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