third-wheel

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Description

Miyeon was tired of third-wheeling the SooShu couple and she wants to leave.

But Shuhua has something to say.

Foreword

hi! here with a quick mishu oneshot before i start school again /groans/. why not right?

for Cart readers, don't worry, i'll still finish it for sure! but i figured that i'd take a short break from it for now to get better with it since i'm not too sure how much people like Cart right now. but like i said, i will finish it because it's my baby!

anyway, i'd appreciate if you let me know what you think and if you liked the story. see yall again <3

 

GarbageCanDoIt
might write a bonus chapter but we'll see~

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Sug-ga
#1
Chapter 1: I read this with “ I DO “ on repeat and damn that was it. The new song fits this narrative so well. I was deep in my feelings while reading lol. Thank you so much! It was stressful that our poor Ramyeon had her heart broken more than once, but fortunately it ended well for her, and the shippers lol :D
Pandaeunn #2
Chapter 1: I bet Neverland is dying cause of curiosity after Shuhua did that, I mean i would to if that really happened ((ノ≧∇≦)ノ ミ ┻━┻

MISHU NEVER DIES!!!( ꈍᴗꈍ)
xolovetaeny3981
#3
Chapter 1: I can't get enough mishu no matter how much stories i read about them. Thank you for writing this. Its well written and the feels, oh God. I can feel the emotions while reading if that even makes sense lol
Mitzu97 #4
Chapter 1: Omgggg
Thank you authornimmm
rizazack #5
Chapter 1: Yess bonus chapter 💜👍👍
OtakuMarie #6
Chapter 1: AHHH-- this might be the real situation between the TJ. 😂 I really love this story. Hoping for more bonus chapters 😂❤️
ApathyandLycanthropy
#7
Chapter 1: Chapter 1: (Electricity went boom, so here I am using Denny's wifi.)

Firstly, I love how you introduced Miyeon's perspective and how you expressed her thoughts and emotions with the whole T&J and SooShu dynamic going on. You can sympathize with her, and I can safely say that I felt a little sting when it seemed like she was pushed back as this "third-wheel background character" while SooShu are in the spotlight. I also love the way you expressed how Miyeon feels with how Shuhua acts around Soojin vs. how Shuhua acts her. Just adds to the rawness, for lack of better words.

Secondly, this is how I lowkey imagine Shuhua to act like. Behind closed doors, she's probably more affectionate and sweeter. Maybe not the type to use her words often, but relies on her actions to express how she feels. So, this is an extra bonus for me and I adore your portrayal of her. I especially love the scene where Shuhua just goes into Miyeon's room and cuddles up to her like it's the most natural thing to do. Bed-time cuddles are my .

And thirdly, the fluff. God, the fluff towards the end. I smiled at how Shuhua still keeps that endearing "bratty" attitude towards Miyeon, even when she's deadass confessing to her. "I like you, stupid." Never change, Shuhua. (Also, Miyeon's reaction for the rest of that scene is adorable. She's really quite innocent for her own good.)

Overall, this one-shot is getting a goddamn mark. Bless you for making my day. If you do plan a bonus chapter, I'll be patiently waiting.

(I meant to comment on your Cart fic too, but I couldn't think of what to say. I'll probably draft one when I re-read it again.)

Anyway, take care and hope your classes go well for you 👍
Yuqisslave
#8
Chapter 1: I loved it T^T That was so cute, I really like your stories as always :p Keep going and take care, bye ! ♡
SkylerSubs
#9
Chapter 1: OH MY GOD THIS WAS SO GUD!! I geniuenly was hooked every line i had no clue which direction it was going with all the angst but i'm glad it ended the way it did i'm sobbinggg T^T! The fact they were on vlive stressed me out so much but I love Shuhua cheekily teasing Neverlands like that haha! If the screen went black like that I think Mishu stans would panic as hell and basically act like what you wrote XD. This one-shot was amazing and you're an amazing authour too so thx for this!!

Also thanks for the comments you write on my AU, especially your latest it was so sweet to read so thx for that! I'm working on my next chapter but was also considering doing some one shot or smth cause same with u, I'll finish it but it will just take a while haha so I understand you posting this and taking your time with that. So honestly thx for this oneshot (sry ik im repeating myself lol) cause it was and amazing read truely!!

And sorry I haven't gotten round to catching up on Cart so when I do I promise I'll comment on them too like you do me cuz like I said I genuienly appreciate your responses :))

Anyways, I hope school isn't too hard on you, take your time with your AUs we'll be patiently waiting haha. Take care <3
moonrene
#10
Chapter 1: cute omg bless